Bat_Country_Chick Idiot
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 842
| July 20th, 2006 at 10:09pm Broken Hearted
The night is young
Broken hearted you are
The sky is darken amoung you
Happyness isn't far
Tear you cry dry up
The sky becomes lighten |
Miss Misfit Geek
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 265 | July 20th, 2006 at 11:06pm AWESOME JOB!
you are good at writing..
keep it up.  |
Bat_Country_Chick Idiot
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 842
| July 20th, 2006 at 11:07pm Thanks!!!  |
Rocking_Bass_Chick Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 15 | July 21st, 2006 at 07:48pm I love it. It is very sensitive. I think thats how u spell it |
Bat_Country_Chick Idiot
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 842
| July 21st, 2006 at 08:13pm |
Rotten Idiot
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 671
 | July 21st, 2006 at 08:33pm I love it. It's short and to the point, but it leaves an impact. This is my favorite poem of yours so far. |
Bat_Country_Chick Idiot
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 842
| July 21st, 2006 at 08:37pm rejectallamerican:I love it. It's short and to the point, but it leaves an impact. This is my favorite poem of yours so far.
Thanks you very much.  |
whersermind Geek
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 165
| July 21st, 2006 at 11:05pm that's so fucking hopeful, i love it  |
Bat_Country_Chick Idiot
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 842
| July 21st, 2006 at 11:09pm [quote="whersermind"] that's so fucking hopeful, i love it [/quote]
Thank!!! I'm glad you like it. |