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Miss Misfit
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Miss Misfit
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July 21st, 2006 at 09:15am
Im awake your asleep the sun will
rise just like it did the other day
you the one I cant replace.

I see you and you see me
together we could never be
somthing you had planed all along

Deep down its falling apart
Deep down its just another broken heart
Another lie set in stone

Cant think of words to say
If you should ever walk my way
Gone would come out so easily

You were right I was wrong
Could we at least try to keep this strong
one more time

We are both waiting for somthing that will never return

Its hard enough to look at you
and know you dont feel the way I do
So why dont you just go when I say Im gone?

Its hard to explain.
But the feelings began to drain the life from me

I tried my best not to hang on everyword you said
but still your in my head

The truth is the truth even if you dont want to hear it
we came so close but now we're no where near it

I could stand infront of a million and only see your face
but it wouldnt matter much to me or to you
because we're just trying to fill an empty space to add to a book of empty pages.

When your forced into somthing you dont belong
its not long before the regrets run strong

you walk by with out a glance
steal a kiss just by chance

it hurts so to know you want to go
even when Im feeling in the same way


I have mixed feelings about this one.
I like parts of it...and then I dont like parts of it. Rolling Eyes
but what do you guys think?
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
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Mibba
July 21st, 2006 at 09:19am
It's okay, but check your spelling. Wink
Miss Misfit
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Miss Misfit
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July 21st, 2006 at 09:22am
Ella:
It's okay, but check your spelling. Wink


I know...
it could do with some better grammer.
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Inari
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538
July 21st, 2006 at 11:18am
I really liked that one.

The truth is the truth even if you dont want to hear it
we came so close but now we're no where near it

I could stand infront of a million and only see your face
but it wouldnt matter much to me or to you
because we're just trying to fill an empty space to add to a book of empty pages.


I'm in love with that part.
Nathalie.
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Nathalie.
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Posts: 11756
July 21st, 2006 at 11:19am
I like it.
Dehren McGhengland
Rotting On Here
Dehren McGhengland
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July 21st, 2006 at 04:16pm
It wasn't the greatest, but it was good nonetheless. Cool
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