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| IxAmxMe Geek  Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 327  | Put a gun to his head, Oh God if he was dead, I'd be singin' and dancin' in the rain. I don't have to deal with this pain. It's like a heartache, with no cure. I won't have to deal with him anymore. He's gone, it's on, the happiness inside of me. He hit, he bit away at the love we had. But it wasn't real, wasn't real at all. Gotta face reality. Looking, staring, glaring at me. I won't miss him at all. I'll watch him fall. Right in front of me, and I don't care. I don't have to deal with him anymore. I wrote this after a bad relationship. I'm still not over him, though. I made me feel better at the time.  |
| IxAmxMe Geek Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 327 | |
| SugarGreen King For A Couple Of Days  Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 3369 | |
| Fink. Geek  Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 289 | |
| SugarGreen King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 3369 | Fink.:LMAO  |
| Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | Ummm, if you don't like it then you should at least give a reason. Yeah, it sucked. I'm sorry but it did. It was choppy, forced, and felt really repetitive. I'm only being honest so you can work on improving it, I don't think there's any point in me saying 'wow that was great!' when it wasn't. I did quite like these lines though; 'But it wasn't real, wasn't real at all' because they had a nice flow and rhythm to them. A little cliched, but I did like them. Don't be mad at me  Keep trying. |
| IxAmxMe Geek Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 327 | |
| steady riot. King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 2907 | |
| IxAmxMe Geek Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 327 |
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