The whispering moment

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SugarGreen
King For A Couple Of Days
SugarGreen
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 3369
July 22nd, 2006 at 10:37pm
The whispering moment
In the darkness clear
Sykkel are you listening?
The shadows were my friends
And now they're torn to shreds
The light pierces my eyes
Like hot pokers from the sun
I try to get back the dark
And yet it never comes
Knowlege has a double edge
Please be warned
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Peter Petrelli
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161
July 23rd, 2006 at 06:10am
I really liked this. I loved the 'hot pokers' image especially.
Emily-Cool
Falling In Love With The Board
Emily-Cool
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 6657
July 23rd, 2006 at 06:27am
Ahh in a way I really like it, its short and sweet. Smile
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