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Bat_Country_Chick Idiot Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 842	July 25th, 2006 at 05:21pm War War isn't the answer It won't solve all the problems The battle still goes on Our troops are not yet done As we watch the one's we love march away We silently greve for their pain We sit in hopes they will return hope but Our troops are not yet done
IxAmxMe Geek Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 327	July 25th, 2006 at 05:30pm "Our troops are not yet done" intersting line! I like it!
Bat_Country_Chick Idiot Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 842	July 25th, 2006 at 05:48pm Thanks!!
IxAmxMe Geek Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 327	July 25th, 2006 at 05:52pm no problemo, chick!
SugarGreen King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 3369	July 25th, 2006 at 11:21pm I agree that war seems to not end and it is not a solution because of that. Very good writing. You may want to use a spell checker once in a while.
Bat_Country_Chick Idiot Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 842	July 26th, 2006 at 10:01am Jaguire13: I agree that war seems to not end and it is not a solution because of that. Very good writing. You may want to use a spell checker once in a while. Thanks!! I do agree that I should have used spell check.
Addison Montgomery. Falling In Love With The Board Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 7078	July 26th, 2006 at 11:22am The battle still goes on Our troops are not yet done That part is awesome
Bat_Country_Chick Idiot Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 842	July 26th, 2006 at 11:26am Thanks!!!
Addison Montgomery. Falling In Love With The Board Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 7078	July 26th, 2006 at 11:29am Tis ok
Bat_Country_Chick Idiot Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 842	July 27th, 2006 at 12:13pm Chris is mine: Tis ok I'm glad you liked it!!
shit! cyanide! Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 12	July 28th, 2006 at 03:15am wow, that's really good! so true..
Emily-Cool Falling In Love With The Board Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 6657	July 28th, 2006 at 04:48am hey thats not bad.. but mm .. theres somthing not quite right with the flow.. not for me..
Bat_Country_Chick Idiot Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 842	July 28th, 2006 at 04:54pm Thanks!!
k-contentbarrier- Addict Age: 33 Gender: Male Posts: 14139	July 28th, 2006 at 05:26pm short and sweet. Hope to see more like it!
Bat_Country_Chick Idiot Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 842	July 28th, 2006 at 06:08pm Argh I'm a Pirate: short and sweet. Hope to see more like it! I hope to write more like this one!!
Toxic Teeth Idiot Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 645	July 28th, 2006 at 06:17pm i like short poems....that was awesome! Great job!
Bat_Country_Chick Idiot Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 842	July 29th, 2006 at 05:19pm Frozen Daiquiri: i like short poems....that was awesome! Great job! Thanks!!
Meski Addict Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 14856	July 29th, 2006 at 05:24pm damn, that was a good poem
Bat_Country_Chick Idiot Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 842	July 29th, 2006 at 08:30pm MESKI: damn, that was a good poem I'm glad you liked it
Retro Suicide Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 103	July 30th, 2006 at 12:30am It's simple, straightforward, I like it. I usually get kind of judgemental when I see such short poems, I think you should add some more. It's really good though.

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