Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | July 25th, 2006 at 08:23pm Look at my eyes
Do you realize
The pain you're causing me?
Can you see
The misery that lies beneath?
I'm ok on the outside
But my pain rages on
Like a fire that won't die
I'm burning right infront of you
But you won't try to save me
You'll save yourself
And no one else
Is this what love's suppose to be?
Tell me
Can you see me?
Crying?
Dying?
Can you here me?
Screaming?
Throwing things?
Can you?
No...no you can't
Can you feel my rage?
My pain?
My....love?
I love you dammit!
But you don't....love me |
SugarGreen
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 3369 | July 25th, 2006 at 11:16pm My response:
Sometimes people cannot help other people and can only help themselves because people choose to do things and other people cannot control them. For example: I cannot make your decisions for you. You have to make your own decisions.
We are not mind readers. They might love you but have a horrible way of showing it. So just look out for yourself and be true to your own feelings as long as they are not homicidal/suicidal or something illegal.
What you wrote is good. |
The Rev
Addict
Age: 38
Gender: Male
Posts: 14004 | July 25th, 2006 at 11:56pm i liked the beginning of it.. but didn't so much like the ending.. |
Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | July 26th, 2006 at 11:32am thanx....=] |
Addison Montgomery.
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 7078
  | July 26th, 2006 at 11:35am Like the beginning |
Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | July 26th, 2006 at 11:36am thank u |
IxAmxMe
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 327
| July 26th, 2006 at 03:07pm I like it! Don't pay any attention to the negative stuff. Keep it up!  |
Flame
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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Gender: -
Posts: 5 | July 26th, 2006 at 03:12pm It's really good!!  |
Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | July 26th, 2006 at 06:05pm thanx =] |
IxAmxMe
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 327
| July 26th, 2006 at 07:07pm |
Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | July 26th, 2006 at 07:16pm so...does that mean u liked it? |
