Midnight Coma

Board index - Your poetry

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snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912	July 26th, 2006 at 04:51pm Can't break the darkness by bending the night Moonlight hunts cursed souls and hits forsaken hearts Breathing upon pale skin writhing in panting pain Beneath his hands helplessly moving Shivers thundering as her eyes burst the clouds Spilling stories upon the bedsheets Wiping her secrets from her face in defence It's not distrust leaking from her liquor-drowned eyes But fear burning her fingertips Leaving trails of blisters on her misused hands And her indecent guilt bleeding down her thigh Causing his heart to spare a beat His lips begging desperately in husky sounds Anxious eyes fixed upon her fragile frame She's avoiding his gaze in embarrassment Silently pleading for him to leave With her feeble hands gently pushing him away His fingers seizing her slender shoulders She's breaking the darkness with noiseless cries Trying to flee from the hunting rays of moonlight Red-rimmed eyes scanning his blank pallid face As he's pinning her down preventively And as she dares to part her trembling lips to mumble a lie He knows better than to believe she's alright
Meski Addict Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 14856	July 26th, 2006 at 05:03pm BEAUTIFUL I loved it, the best poem i've read in 2 weeks!
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	July 26th, 2006 at 05:30pm Ridiculously wonderful. Love every word. Also, the alliteration was a nice touch. ILOVEIT.
IxAmxMe Geek Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 327	July 26th, 2006 at 06:19pm I loved it so much!
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	July 27th, 2006 at 05:16am I've missed reading your poetry. It's beautiful. But you know that.
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	July 27th, 2006 at 11:00am It's absolutely divine, you know that? I love it. And, I loved the alliteration too. But I especially loved this line 'It's not distrust leaking from her liquor-drowned eyes'
Nathalie. Addict Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 11756	July 27th, 2006 at 11:03am Wow ! That's amazing! I love it !
rollerpig GSBitch Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283	July 28th, 2006 at 08:52am I so love that <333
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912	July 28th, 2006 at 02:48pm Wow, thank you, guys. I actually didn't think of it as too good, but I'm glad you like it.
Dehren McGhengland Rotting On Here Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 49206	July 28th, 2006 at 02:50pm That was absolutely amazing. I love it!
[Your Best Mistake] Idiot Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 551	July 28th, 2006 at 02:55pm Wow. That is truly stunning!

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