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Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | July 26th, 2006 at 06:17pm I can't stand it anymore
The thought of losing a friend
Is torture
You were one of my best friends
Someone I could talk to
When I was angry or sad
You were there through everything
And it took only one fight
For you to leave
But I said some things that I regret now
I hurt you
And you hurt me
But I want to make things better
And you want to ignore me
I'm trying to apologize
But you turn away
You say "I hate you"
And walk the other direction
It took one fight
For you to leave
And I wish that you would stay
So we could be friends once more
But this is an apology you won't accept
Beacuse you say
"I hate you" |
SugarGreen
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 3369 | July 26th, 2006 at 09:13pm You did very well on this. |
Rhiannon.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 2999
 | July 26th, 2006 at 09:30pm wowza. i loves it |
Emily-Cool
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 6657 | July 27th, 2006 at 04:51am Thats not bad at all !! |
k-contentbarrier-
Addict
Age: 33
Gender: Male
Posts: 14139 | July 28th, 2006 at 01:41am definitely not bad!  |
Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | July 29th, 2006 at 09:10am u really like it?!?!? thanx =D |
steady riot.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 2907 | July 29th, 2006 at 02:45pm I didn't like it. It was forced, and it did not flow very well. At all. |
Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | July 29th, 2006 at 03:27pm ok |
Blink-AdiseInUtero.
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 141 | July 29th, 2006 at 03:31pm kool |
Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | July 29th, 2006 at 03:32pm thanx...by the way.....i like ur avatar |
Blink-AdiseInUtero.
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 141 | July 29th, 2006 at 09:44pm thanks!i like yours to i think billie looks better with his hair like that and heavy eyeliner |
watch me fade
Idiot
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 936 | July 29th, 2006 at 09:49pm I love it. better than half the crap i make. |
watch me fade
Idiot
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 936 | July 29th, 2006 at 09:50pm oh. just one thing that bugs me about it. i think it should be: But I said some things that I now regret.
instead of
But I said some things that I regret now |
IxAmxMe
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 327
 | July 29th, 2006 at 10:28pm I really enjoyed reading that! |
Retro Suicide
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 103 | July 30th, 2006 at 12:28am It was alright. It didn't flow very well, not to sound rude but I've noticed that about your few poems I've seen on GSB. I think your poems would be a lot better if you worked on that a little more. Other than that, your an okay poet. |
Hardcore_rock_fan
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 18 | July 30th, 2006 at 12:51am I liked it |
Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | July 31st, 2006 at 09:32am thanx.....=D |
Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | July 31st, 2006 at 09:33am armdelonge_ jackandsally:thanks!i like yours to i think billie looks better with his hair like that and heavy eyeliner
Billie Joe is shmexy either way...but he does look really shmexy with heavier eyeliner and and long hair...i agree with you!!! =D |
