The Resonation of Joy and Sorrow (a very short poem)

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Remarkable Rocket Falling In Love With The Board Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 5761	July 26th, 2006 at 06:37pm I've written about ten poems today... for a poetry notebook for my summer english class. So Why not post one of them.. its a pretty rough sketch of a poem... especially for what I ussually write. Sugestions are welcome with wide wide and ready arms. ******************* The Resonation of Joy and Sorrow: A wisher's well is a lachrymal Upon which the sorrowful will lay And flood and let it be known While the joyful watch with pity. And the joyful will whistle Of pride and accomplished contentment Until the hearts of the sorrowful BURST with envy; and flood. â€”Nullity.
Love my insanity Jackass Age: 93 Gender: Female Posts: 1591	July 26th, 2006 at 06:51pm I like it a lot. You seem like you have a way with words, a certain way, that a lot of people don't posess. claps
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	July 27th, 2006 at 05:18am That's pretty cool.
Remarkable Rocket Falling In Love With The Board Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 5761	July 30th, 2006 at 03:56am Thanks, both of you, dolls .
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	July 30th, 2006 at 06:52am Awesome. I really loved it, short, sweet, and somewhat inspired by HIM. Which always makes it a hit with me. I loved the lines 'A wisher's well is a lachrymal Upon which the sorrowful will lay'. Perfect. And it was even better when I looked up the word 'lachrymal', lmao.
Remarkable Rocket Falling In Love With The Board Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 5761	July 30th, 2006 at 12:19pm international_idiot: Awesome. I really loved it, short, sweet, and somewhat inspired by HIM. Which always makes it a hit with me. I loved the lines 'A wisher's well is a lachrymal Upon which the sorrowful will lay'. Perfect. And it was even better when I looked up the word 'lachrymal', lmao. Hahah! ! I was nearly in tears.. Just because I was so frustrated (I cry easily ).. I had so many poems to write.. in just one day. This was the better of all of them. THANKYOU! EDIT: About the Lachrymal Bit.. I also read somewhere.. besides its dictionary definition.. I think it was the ancient Egyptions.. or Ancient greeks.. who used to cry into jars.. and store their tears.. or feelings.. in a jar.. like a diary... and keep them there... and it was called a lachrymal.
Sylar Falling In Love With The Board Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 5703	July 31st, 2006 at 06:50am WOO! I got around to complimenting you at long last!!! Beautiful. And it's pissing me off that not many people have given you compliments on this. I'll kill them.
Remarkable Rocket Falling In Love With The Board Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 5761	July 31st, 2006 at 10:46am Mikko Lindstrom: WOO! I got around to complimenting you at long last!!! Beautiful. And it's pissing me off that not many people have given you compliments on this. I'll kill them. Pssht! Nobody ever comments my poems anyway.
Garrett Hanlund This Board Is My Home Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 30801	July 31st, 2006 at 10:48am Great.
Retro Suicide Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 103	July 31st, 2006 at 08:46pm I like it. :] Not much mroe I can say about it.
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	August 1st, 2006 at 05:05am I love it. I say; without any doubt - you truly have talent. Don't stop writing. One more thing, you spelled *pity wrong
[Broken Pretty] Idiot Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 572	August 1st, 2006 at 06:36am perfectly amazing.
Meski Addict Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 14856	August 1st, 2006 at 06:38am That was great, I loved it!
Remarkable Rocket Falling In Love With The Board Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 5761	August 1st, 2006 at 02:42pm Ella: I love it. I say; without any doubt - you truly have talent. Don't stop writing. One more thing, you spelled *pity wrong Damnit... Thanks Ella

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