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rage;love;clark
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Posts: 494 | July 27th, 2006 at 11:47am The walls inside my room are green
The color of envy or so it seems
It must be hard for you to cope
Restless nights and yes it shows
You’ve left your control on the freeway
You seem to leave it there every day
The soft sun light should calm you down
But you just get angrier now
Sprinklers explode when your foot meets them
You close your eyes and say “never again”
You’ve left your control on the freeway
You seem to leave it there every day
Stop this life and make it good
Rewind it now just like you should
Fast forward through all of the bad parts
Play it again when happiness starts
Your truck is lined with cigarette smoke
You claim this really helps you let go
It’s 8:15 and you’re on route to work
Behind your back, they know you’re a jerk
You’ve left your control on the freeway
You seem to leave it there every day
Your cubicle walls box you in
You always lose and never win
The stack of papers just gets higher
Like fuel being added to the fire
You’ve left your control on the freeway
You seem to leave it there every day
Stop this life and make it good
Rewind it now just like you should
Fast forward through all of the bad parts
Play it again when happiness starts
Stop this life and make it good
Rewind it now just like you should
Fast forward through all of the bad parts
Play it again when happiness starts |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | July 27th, 2006 at 02:08pm I think this my favourite by you.  I really loved it, it was catchy, clever, and well written.
I loved the whole of the first verse, but especially 'The walls inside my room are green
The color of envy or so it seems'.
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rage;love;clark
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Posts: 494 | July 27th, 2006 at 02:35pm international_idiot:I think this my favourite by you. I really loved it, it was catchy, clever, and well written.
I loved the whole of the first verse, but especially 'The walls inside my room are green
The color of envy or so it seems'.
w0000!!!!
thank you so much |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
 | July 27th, 2006 at 02:42pm Wow, agreeing with Ellen on this one.  I like it. |
rage;love;clark
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Posts: 494 | July 27th, 2006 at 02:49pm Hardcore Panda!!1:Wow, agreeing with Ellen on this one. I like it.
YES I JUST FINISHED GUITAR TO IT
w00t.
damn i'm good
lol
thank you for your comments |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | July 27th, 2006 at 04:14pm I really liked that.
It was damn awesome. |
11th Street Kid
King For A Couple Of Days
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Posts: 3645 | July 27th, 2006 at 04:27pm I like it 
Near the beginning.. it kinda seemed like you were trying a bit too hard to make it rhyme though.. |
rage;love;clark
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Posts: 494 | July 27th, 2006 at 04:35pm Inari:I really liked that.
It was damn awesome.
well damn thank you :p |
The Rev
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Age: 38
Gender: Male
Posts: 14004 | July 28th, 2006 at 11:32am i agree.. i think this is the best one ive seen from you |
IxAmxMe
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Posts: 327
 | July 28th, 2006 at 11:42am It was an awesome poem/ song! Love it! |
rage;love;clark
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Posts: 494 | July 28th, 2006 at 12:51pm Bowling For Aleckz:i agree.. i think this is the best one ive seen from you
thank you very much |
