Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | July 29th, 2006 at 09:34am Shattered into tiny pieces
Everything falls apart
Torn from reality
I'm vulnerable to heart aches
The end of us
Is only the beginnig of my revenge
Sharp object
Are the death of me
Liquor
Is my savior
Half a pack of cigarettes
Left on the counter
Passed out on the couch
Empty liqour bottles from the night before
Is my life now
An empty shattered life is now my own |
steady riot.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 2907 | July 29th, 2006 at 02:43pm Doesn't flow too well, but it's not that bad. |
Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | July 29th, 2006 at 03:27pm its a free verse poem....just to le u know....idk...um...i just wrote it down one night.....then i fell asleep....lol...hm...well wat can i do to improve it? |
