You & Me

Board index - Your poetry

Author	Message
Ex.Of.A.Freak.-TCD Falling In Love With The Board Age: 87 Gender: Female Posts: 5844	July 30th, 2006 at 02:08pm A kiss to build a dream upon, A love that never dies. A hope that you are always there, A truth that never lies. Forever wishing you were here, To catch me when I fall. If you were here beside me, I know I'd have it all. So if there ever comes a day, When things just fall apart, I'll always have a place for you, A place inside my heart.
*Hell's lil' Rebel* Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 18	July 30th, 2006 at 02:14pm omg TCD thats really fucking good
[Broken Pretty] Idiot Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 572	July 31st, 2006 at 03:00am pretty.
Retro Suicide Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 103	July 31st, 2006 at 03:53am awe. Simple. Short. Kind of an ordanary rhyme scheme. I did like it, it just sounded so... like every other poem in the world. I think if you kind of went out more, making it longer, using more complex metaphors, it would have been better. But that's just me...
losers_are_cool King For A Couple Of Days Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 4120	July 31st, 2006 at 04:21pm That's cute.
Comic tragedy Idiot Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 546	July 31st, 2006 at 04:23pm It's cute and classy.
the future freaks me out Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2	July 31st, 2006 at 04:41pm I lurve it
tAcOs!-Jay Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: 34 Gender: Male Posts: 83	July 31st, 2006 at 04:52pm i like it..its kool...=]
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	July 31st, 2006 at 07:44pm It's peculiar how much I liked this. Don't lose the simplicity, you are actually writing well.
Open Arms. Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 52	August 1st, 2006 at 02:53am Forever wishing you were here, To catch me when I fall. If you were here beside me, I know I'd have it all. It's absolutely wonderful. I loved this second stanza. Keep up the good work.
Ex.Of.A.Freak.-TCD Falling In Love With The Board Age: 87 Gender: Female Posts: 5844	August 10th, 2006 at 02:24pm Thank you.

Options
Go back to top