k-contentbarrier-
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Age: 33
Gender: Male
Posts: 14139 | August 1st, 2006 at 04:37am I wrote this about my problem. Caffeine. It's a drug to me. I get fucked up so I just drink a soda to get better. Then I just get more depressed after it goes away.
World's imploding.
Nowhere to turn
Just grab the bottle
And crash and burn.
I'm fucked up
But that's okay
I'll be fine
Later today.
When it happens again...
Just down another.
Forget consequences.
It's better than water.
When you run out
It's just like a drug.
Desperately need it
But I just shrug.
The pain is still here...
It's all right, Kyle.
A sugar high
Sure lasts a long while.
Hope you liked it. |
Sara.
This Board Is My Home
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Posts: 31155 | August 1st, 2006 at 04:39am Wow. I love it.
Everything about was just real. and felt true. |
Bittersweet World
Banned
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 28301
 | August 1st, 2006 at 04:43am I do like it. Good job, simple and to the point. Also love the wording. |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
 | August 1st, 2006 at 04:58am It would make a good song, but I'm not too fond of swearing in poetry.
It's okay, not too forced.
P.S. - I have a caffeine problem too xD |
k-contentbarrier-
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Age: 33
Gender: Male
Posts: 14139 | August 1st, 2006 at 02:11pm Thanks everyone. What you said really means a lot to me. |
