Release on parole.

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The Doctor
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Mibba Blog
August 1st, 2006 at 12:42pm
Don't ask, don't tell. Random fact:- More people in university study philosophy than any other subject. Heh.

The thick dust shows just how
far I have came, covering all the
items I intend to eliminate from memory.

A vase of sunflowers watch my every move.
Why? I'm not sure, have they mistaken
my deep insanity for sunshine?
I laugh at their scorn and bitter glare,
the sunflowers droop and wither
until they are as beautiful as a
Van Gough painting.

My attention is drawn to my posters.
They stare and stare as if I were an
animal in a zoo. One poster in particular
almost beckons me to stay.
A young man, with a forest of black vines
growing on his head, eyes the colour of sin.
I carefully rip him into a dozen
strands of ink and paper. He is no
longer my prison guard.

I look around my former prison cell,
my bag full of small trinkets and
collective souvenirs. I smile one last time,
for if I am careful I will never see these
orange tomb walls. A slip of paper, a slim
pocket book and a simple card,
hold my future, my freedom,
and possibly, and so possibly
the end of my insanity and deep hatred.
Open Arms.
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Open Arms.
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August 1st, 2006 at 12:46pm
A vase of sunflowers watch my every move.
Why? I'm not sure, have they mistaken
my deep insanity for sunshine?
I laugh at their scorn and bitter glare,
the sunflowers droop and wither
until they are as beautiful as a
Van Gough painting.

Clap Wonderful!
Babi Kid Rachy
King For A Couple Of Days
Babi Kid Rachy
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August 1st, 2006 at 12:50pm
My attention is drawn to my posters.
They stare and stare as if I were an
animal in a zoo. One poster in particular
almost beckons me to stay.
A young man, with a forest of black vines
growing on his head, eyes the colour of sin.
I carefully rip him into a dozen
strands of ink and paper. He is no
longer my prison guard.

^___^ awesome!
Good poem!
Peter Petrelli
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August 1st, 2006 at 03:05pm
Dude. Shocked

I really loved this. Pretty damn amazing. I especially adored 'I look around my former prison cell,
my bag full of small trinkets and
collective souvenirs. I smile one last time,
for if I am careful I will never see these
orange tomb walls. A slip of paper, a slim
pocket book and a simple card,
hold my future, my freedom,
and possibly, and so possibly
the end of my insanity and deep hatred.'

I wanted to quote the entire poem, but that would be a little silly, wouldn't it? Wink
11th Street Kid
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August 1st, 2006 at 04:27pm
A vase of sunflowers watch my every move.
Why? I'm not sure, have they mistaken
my deep insanity for sunshine?
I laugh at their scorn and bitter glare,
the sunflowers droop and wither
until they are as beautiful as a
Van Gough painting.


I really like that verse. Really good poem. Maybe it's just me in a tedious mood or something... but.. I dunno. It feels like it's missing something Confused
No One Likes You Bitch
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
No One Likes You Bitch
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August 1st, 2006 at 06:28pm
TinkerBellRachyâ„¢:
My attention is drawn to my posters.
They stare and stare as if I were an
animal in a zoo. One poster in particular
almost beckons me to stay.
A young man, with a forest of black vines
growing on his head, eyes the colour of sin.
I carefully rip him into a dozen
strands of ink and paper. He is no
longer my prison guard.

^___^ awesome!
Good poem!


Tehee =]] I agree!! ^^
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
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Mibba
August 1st, 2006 at 07:27pm
A vase of sunflowers watch my every move.
Why? I'm not sure, have they mistaken
my deep insanity for sunshine?
I laugh at their scorn and bitter glare,
the sunflowers droop and wither
until they are as beautiful as a
Van Gough painting.

I absolutely adored that. Very Happy
newagecarny
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Mibba
August 2nd, 2006 at 06:04am
I love it. Very well written.
rollerpig
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August 2nd, 2006 at 06:27am
Really good Very Happy

-likes it a lot- ^__^
Emily-Cool
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August 2nd, 2006 at 11:45am
wow! amaizng ! Up well done !!
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