The Doctor Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 8786
 | August 1st, 2006 at 12:42pm Don't ask, don't tell. Random fact:- More people in university study philosophy than any other subject. Heh.
The thick dust shows just how
far I have came, covering all the
items I intend to eliminate from memory.
A vase of sunflowers watch my every move.
Why? I'm not sure, have they mistaken
my deep insanity for sunshine?
I laugh at their scorn and bitter glare,
the sunflowers droop and wither
until they are as beautiful as a
Van Gough painting.
My attention is drawn to my posters.
They stare and stare as if I were an
animal in a zoo. One poster in particular
almost beckons me to stay.
A young man, with a forest of black vines
growing on his head, eyes the colour of sin.
I carefully rip him into a dozen
strands of ink and paper. He is no
longer my prison guard.
I look around my former prison cell,
my bag full of small trinkets and
collective souvenirs. I smile one last time,
for if I am careful I will never see these
orange tomb walls. A slip of paper, a slim
pocket book and a simple card,
hold my future, my freedom,
and possibly, and so possibly
the end of my insanity and deep hatred. |
Open Arms. Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 52 | August 1st, 2006 at 12:46pm A vase of sunflowers watch my every move.
Why? I'm not sure, have they mistaken
my deep insanity for sunshine?
I laugh at their scorn and bitter glare,
the sunflowers droop and wither
until they are as beautiful as a
Van Gough painting.
 Wonderful! |
Babi Kid Rachy King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 4512 | August 1st, 2006 at 12:50pm My attention is drawn to my posters.
They stare and stare as if I were an
animal in a zoo. One poster in particular
almost beckons me to stay.
A young man, with a forest of black vines
growing on his head, eyes the colour of sin.
I carefully rip him into a dozen
strands of ink and paper. He is no
longer my prison guard.
^___^ awesome!
Good poem! |
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | August 1st, 2006 at 03:05pm Dude.
I really loved this. Pretty damn amazing. I especially adored 'I look around my former prison cell,
my bag full of small trinkets and
collective souvenirs. I smile one last time,
for if I am careful I will never see these
orange tomb walls. A slip of paper, a slim
pocket book and a simple card,
hold my future, my freedom,
and possibly, and so possibly
the end of my insanity and deep hatred.'
I wanted to quote the entire poem, but that would be a little silly, wouldn't it?  |
11th Street Kid King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3645 | August 1st, 2006 at 04:27pm A vase of sunflowers watch my every move.
Why? I'm not sure, have they mistaken
my deep insanity for sunshine?
I laugh at their scorn and bitter glare,
the sunflowers droop and wither
until they are as beautiful as a
Van Gough painting.
I really like that verse. Really good poem. Maybe it's just me in a tedious mood or something... but.. I dunno. It feels like it's missing something  |
No One Likes You Bitch Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 14 | August 1st, 2006 at 06:28pm TinkerBellRachyâ„¢:My attention is drawn to my posters.
They stare and stare as if I were an
animal in a zoo. One poster in particular
almost beckons me to stay.
A young man, with a forest of black vines
growing on his head, eyes the colour of sin.
I carefully rip him into a dozen
strands of ink and paper. He is no
longer my prison guard.
^___^ awesome!
Good poem!
Tehee =]] I agree!! ^^ |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921
| August 1st, 2006 at 07:27pm A vase of sunflowers watch my every move.
Why? I'm not sure, have they mistaken
my deep insanity for sunshine?
I laugh at their scorn and bitter glare,
the sunflowers droop and wither
until they are as beautiful as a
Van Gough painting.
I absolutely adored that.  |
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495
| August 2nd, 2006 at 06:04am I love it. Very well written. |
rollerpig GSBitch
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283 | August 2nd, 2006 at 06:27am Really good
-likes it a lot- ^__^ |
Emily-Cool Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 6657 | August 2nd, 2006 at 11:45am wow! amaizng !  well done !! |