Milk
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 3741
  | August 4th, 2006 at 07:43pm Er. Enjoy..?
Listlessy Torn
Breathing upon shattered roses,
One will question the right
Dancing alone in corners of beauty,
Only to be surrounded by darkness
Far from acceptance, leaving behind
The bombshell of solitude
Captured sanity, only to be let free
How long until integrity questions itself?
The disregarded tears,
Dried up and deadly
The incomplete thought, of what it's like
To be 'happy'
Wandering shadows, only to be crushed,
By broken dreams, questioning aimlessly
Trying to unravel, the mysteries of yourself |
Hardcore_rock_fan
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 18 | August 4th, 2006 at 08:22pm I like it |
Milk
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 3741
| August 6th, 2006 at 07:21pm Thank you. I used to be a very active member in this board, but something happened. I still don't know what. |
Arcane-Inamorata
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 3278
| August 6th, 2006 at 07:22pm wow. Great job!
I like it alot |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | August 7th, 2006 at 01:29pm Awesome. I really liked it. I do think it lacks a certain spark at the moment... but it's still very good, and I adored the first two lines immensely. |
