Hey, my name is asshole!

Hi my name is asshole!
I do just as I please.
I never listen to anybody.
Not my mum, not my niece!
I’ve been smoking pot since I was three,
And drinking before I was born.
I steal everything I can get my hands on.
Everything from candy to porn.

My dad hits
And my mum cries.
My dog bites
And my little sister lies.

No we’re not a happy family.
We probably never will be.
But I can make it on my own.
I don’t need a place called home.

I tell you how I love
While I give you the last kiss.
I say that I’m real,
One of the few ones that is.

But you don’t see that it’s all fake.
I just got a mask on
To hide that the real me is gone.

The one who cries for mummy in her sleep.
The one that has gotten in to deep.
The on that wants to beat up dad.
The that is really sad.

Hey, my name is asshole!
I do just as I please
Cause the world around me fucked up.
So I sit there with my coffee cup
And wish that it’s all a dream
And that I’ll wake up with a scream.
I pinch myself harder everyday
But it never goes away.

This shadow hanging over me
Wants me to see
Before it’s to late,
And I end up at the pearly gate!


What do you think??

I think it'd make quite a good song with a fun start and then a change where it goes darker.

The ending was really odd though o__O

Maybe you should change it to something like:

But/And I think I'm already
At the pearly gates


...?

Just a suggestion.