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rage;love;clark
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 494 | August 12th, 2006 at 11:17pm Seeing through my eyes
I can’t go on like this
Watching people die
It’s either hit or miss
Looking at the screen
It’s all a lie inside
It’s not diamond underneath
I’m losing all my teeth
Tabasco fills my veins
It really gets quite hot
Acid is the rain
It really burns a lot
It’s your super sweet revenge
On my lonely soul
It’s not diamond underneath
I’m losing all my teeth
Require admission to get to myself
Riding your coat tails straight down to hell
But I know why you’ll leave me behind
And for such a good reason, I’ll be just fine
The side walk is a pit
Set in stone we wrote
We miss more than we hit
And to this we note
We’ll never be just fine
I’m gonna sail away
It’s not diamond underneath
I’m losing all my teeth
The stars are floating bombs
Set to collapse on me
Not distinctly right or wrong
Precaution to heed
So throw this down the drain
I’ll be just fine
It’s not diamond underneath
I’m losing all my teeth
Require admission to get to myself
Riding your coat tails straight down to hell
But I know why you’ll leave me behind
And for such a good reason, I’ll be just fine
Require admission to get to myself
Riding your coat tails straight down to hell
But I know why you’ll leave me behind
And for such a good reason, I’ll be just fine |
rage;love;clark
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 494 | August 13th, 2006 at 07:23pm well? |
rollerpig
GSBitch
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 62283 | August 13th, 2006 at 07:58pm ...
It's okay, I like it better than your other stuff.
What does that mean?
"It’s not diamond underneath
I’m losing all my teeth"
...
Is it a song? |
rage;love;clark
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 494 | August 13th, 2006 at 08:11pm [Advertising Space.]:...
It's okay, I like it better than your other stuff.
What does that mean?
"It’s not diamond underneath
I’m losing all my teeth"
...
Is it a song?
thanks
that means it's not perfect underneath my skin, like i'm going insane kind of
and i'm losing all my teeth is a way of symbolizing how i'm going insane |
Watoosh!
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 281 | August 13th, 2006 at 11:16pm well... why "i'm losing all my teeth" instead of something like "i'm boiling over with grief"? |
Dead End Girl
Addict
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 10219 | August 13th, 2006 at 11:22pm Well, I'm on the fence on this one.
Tabasco fills my veins
It really gets quite hot
Acid is the rain
It really burns a lot
It sounds like a child wrote that.
And yet you have this:
Require admission to get to myself
Riding your coat tails straight down to hell
But I know why you’ll leave me behind
And for such a good reason, I’ll be just fine
It's very poetic and my favorite line.
So...yes. It was okay overall. |
rage;love;clark
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 494 | August 14th, 2006 at 12:45am Kali Pocket!:Well, I'm on the fence on this one.
Tabasco fills my veins
It really gets quite hot
Acid is the rain
It really burns a lot
It sounds like a child wrote that.
And yet you have this:
Require admission to get to myself
Riding your coat tails straight down to hell
But I know why you’ll leave me behind
And for such a good reason, I’ll be just fine
It's very poetic and my favorite line.
So...yes. It was okay overall.
thank you for being constructive |
rollerpig
GSBitch
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 62283 | August 14th, 2006 at 08:48am rage;love;clark:[Advertising Space.]:...
It's okay, I like it better than your other stuff.
What does that mean?
"It’s not diamond underneath
I’m losing all my teeth"
...
Is it a song?
thanks
that means it's not perfect underneath my skin, like i'm going insane kind of
and i'm losing all my teeth is a way of symbolizing how i'm going insane
Thanks. I thought so. |
billiejoeblowjob
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42 | August 14th, 2006 at 05:33pm rage;love;clark:Kali Pocket!:Well, I'm on the fence on this one.
Tabasco fills my veins
It really gets quite hot
Acid is the rain
It really burns a lot
It sounds like a child wrote that.
And yet you have this:
Require admission to get to myself
Riding your coat tails straight down to hell
But I know why you’ll leave me behind
And for such a good reason, I’ll be just fine
It's very poetic and my favorite line.
So...yes. It was okay overall.
thank you for being constructive
exactly. |
The Rev
Addict
Age: 38
Gender: Male
Posts: 14004 | August 14th, 2006 at 06:57pm its not too bad. |
rage;love;clark
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 494 | August 14th, 2006 at 07:43pm Aleckzander:its not too bad.
thanks ya
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Arcane-Inamorata
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 3278
 | August 14th, 2006 at 07:45pm i thought it was really good.
But the "it really burns a lot" line kinda... i dunno, takes it down a little. |
Edward Cullen
Jackass
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1910 | August 14th, 2006 at 07:47pm Seeing through my eyes
I can’t go on like this
Watching people die
It’s either hit or miss
Looking at the screen
It’s all a lie inside  |
rage;love;clark
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 494 | August 14th, 2006 at 09:18pm xBuried Alive By Lovex:Seeing through my eyes
I can’t go on like this
Watching people die
It’s either hit or miss
Looking at the screen
It’s all a lie inside
thank ya |
[Broken Pretty]
Idiot
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 572 | August 14th, 2006 at 09:46pm i like it.
The stars are floating bombs
Set to collapse on me
Not distinctly right or wrong
Precaution to heed
So throw this down the drain
I’ll be just fine
It’s not diamond underneath
I’m losing all my teeth. |
the_christian_chick
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 99 | August 14th, 2006 at 09:52pm I wuv it! |
rage;love;clark
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 494 | August 16th, 2006 at 09:04am [broken pretty]_.:i like it.
The stars are floating bombs
Set to collapse on me
Not distinctly right or wrong
Precaution to heed
So throw this down the drain
I’ll be just fine
It’s not diamond underneath
I’m losing all my teeth.
thank you |
