Beautiful_Imperfection
Geek
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 273 | August 13th, 2006 at 02:16pm Why is it that everytime I walk
into a room
everyone stops and stares?
is it because I’m different?
That I dont dress like
the ‘in crowd’?
So what if I wear dark clothes
or so what if my clothes
stand out amongst others
some people say I
just do it for attention
but I’m not
I’m just expressing
myself
showing people who I am
and obviously noone else
can do that.
They dont have the guts
because they know they will be judged
and their friends will turn their backs
on them
well I do it everyday
not because I have to
because I want to
its who I am
and if you have
a problem with
how I dress then
fuck you
because your just another
person only wanting to be
liked and accepted by
others that judge from
the outside
not the inside
and you know your
not happy
and that you want
to dress how you
want to
but you can’t
because you
dont want to be judged |
Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | August 14th, 2006 at 11:47am koolness great job =] |
Michake
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 295 | August 14th, 2006 at 11:53am thats amazing, it made me cry, great job. do you mind if i save it? |
Walking_Insomniac
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 100 | August 14th, 2006 at 12:06pm i am |
billiejoeblowjob
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42 | August 14th, 2006 at 05:16pm long... but amazing. ^^;; |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
 | August 14th, 2006 at 05:24pm That was kind of bad. Utterly cliche, no poetic language to be found. It sounded like your average everyday rant from the "social outcast". Try using metaphors and colorful words next time. |
billiejoeblowjob
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42 | August 14th, 2006 at 07:35pm Hardcore Panda!!1:That was kind of bad. Utterly cliche, no poetic language to be found. It sounded like your average everyday rant from the "social outcast". Try using metaphors and colorful words next time.
Admittedly cliche but nevertheless, good to me. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| August 14th, 2006 at 09:41pm billiejoeblowjob:Hardcore Panda!!1:That was kind of bad. Utterly cliche, no poetic language to be found. It sounded like your average everyday rant from the "social outcast". Try using metaphors and colorful words next time.
Admittedly cliche but nevertheless, good to me. To each his own.  I'm overly critical of poetry, and I admit it. |
