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Jackass
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Posts: 1372 | August 14th, 2006 at 11:24pm VERSE 1
I am the pre-deceast
I never had a chance
Desensitized by heavy metal rain
I became the living dead
CHORUS
Sedate me, recreate me
So I don't give it a thought
So I wont feel when you rape me
I'm just living to die!
VERSE 2
We are all pre-deceast
Packaged inside the lines
Ready to be coloured blood red
But you went outside the lines
REPEAT CHORUS
BRIDGE (MIDDLE 8 )
You can burn me, but not my flag!
You can destroy a nation, but hope will remain!
Can you find what you came for?
Perhaps you've gone insane?
VERSE 3
We are your currency
For you to trade away
Objectified by inhumane times
It happens every day
REPEAT CHORUS
VERSE 4
I am the pre-deceast
Nothing is left inside
I was raised ready to die
I'm living to die |
billiejoeblowjob
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42 | August 15th, 2006 at 02:10am i'm confused on the meaning of it but it is okay. (at first it seemed like abortion, then suicide, rape, and oMG i'm just LOST.) |
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Jackass
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Posts: 1372 | August 15th, 2006 at 10:46am War, and people who are raised in war-torn countries. |
billiejoeblowjob
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42 | August 15th, 2006 at 10:49am Ahhhh!:War, and people who are raised in war-torn countries.
:3 Ahh.... well now it makes better sense. |
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Jackass
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Posts: 1372 | August 15th, 2006 at 04:25pm well, i think its really good. |
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Jackass
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Posts: 1372 | August 16th, 2006 at 09:20am What the fuck, you guys? |
Yes I Am God
Basket Case
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 15946 | August 16th, 2006 at 07:22pm I've always like your poems.
AND HAHA YOUR POST COUNT IS 1337. 
Ahem.
I can definately see it as a song more-over a poem, though. |
Dead End Girl
Addict
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 10219 | August 16th, 2006 at 10:05pm It's good. But the You can burn me, but not my flag! verse confuses me.
It seems to be against the war untill that.
Is it a satire?
Anywho, I liked it =D. |
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Jackass
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Posts: 1372 | August 16th, 2006 at 10:51pm Kali Hearts AFI:It's good. But the You can burn me, but not my flag! verse confuses me.
It seems to be against the war untill that.
Is it a satire?
Anywho, I liked it =D.
Thats the thing. It almost is satire.
They are traumatized by war, but rather than giving in, they keep fighting. Thus causing more trauma. It's nothing but truthiness. |
