Protest the Hero.
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Posts: 6048 | August 16th, 2006 at 09:09pm Life begins in the warm October
You'll never know when yours is over.
Hearts will cross and then they'll fall
Yours had yet to cross, you never knew at all.
Your friends were waiting for you to come out of your shell
You never came out, you hid in your own hell.
Sunlight shone upon your life, you never knew what it would do for you
You gave us memories to cherish, you denied our happiness, but it was true.
Life ends in cold February.
Your vows of silence began at the monastery.
You thought you were alone, you thought no one cared.
But when you died, we all cried. We were there. |
Yes I Am God
Basket Case
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 15946 | August 16th, 2006 at 09:48pm It has a nice meaning.
I liked, "Life begins in the warm October
You'll never know when yours is over.
Hearts will cross and then they'll fall
Yours had yet to cross, you never knew at all."
But that's about it. =S
Not to be harsh or anything.
I like the poem. It has a lot of meaning. |
Protest the Hero.
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Posts: 6048 | August 16th, 2006 at 09:49pm Yes I Am God:It has a nice meaning.
I liked, "Life begins in the warm October
You'll never know when yours is over.
Hearts will cross and then they'll fall
Yours had yet to cross, you never knew at all."
But that's about it. =S
Not to be harsh or anything.
I like the poem. It has a lot of meaning.
That's okay. I didn't write it to make it sound great, I just wrote it for the meaning. Thank you for commenting. |
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Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 7940 | August 16th, 2006 at 09:55pm I liked it. It was very moving. I know what it's like to loose somebody very close to you and so that helped me connect more and understand the pain.
god rest his soul |
Goodbye, Norma Jeane
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 4724 | August 17th, 2006 at 12:07am I really liked the last four lines.
But all of it was meaningful.
R.I.P. |
