Vampiric Acid and Unhappy Girl

these are a few of my old poems...i will post more when i get them wrote on here....uh hope you like them ..tell me what you think...

Unhappy Girl

I sit alone down in my room
My tears are keeping me awake
Till nightmares take me to my doom
I'm drowning in this lake
That I created from my tears
Why can't I be that happy girl, I used to be
Now confroted by her fears
Of a life of hate and pain
This is driving me insane

I don't want to be perfect
In this world of perfection
I just want to be happy
Is that too much to ask for
Why am I mad all the time
Misunderstood and don't know why
Take me away to neverland
Where Happiness never ends

I know its just a silly dream
Its all I have to hope for
Im coming apart at the seams
My red eyes are getting sore
I have nowhere to run
As the clouds roll in
Come cover up the sun
Just another rainy day
This is not my fucking day

If perfections what it takes
Then I will always be
An unhapy broken girl

Vampiric Acid Oct, 06/2005


In a world of hate and lies and death
I walk along the city streets
Haunted by a shadow of the forsaken
Feared by most, friends to few
Dark and dim and evil
Fangs sharp, ready to bite
Drain every ounce of blood
Pitiless, deathless souls damned to eternity
Life always, hell on earth
Immortal to thier army's of men
Weapons of mass destruction
Evolving into creatures of day and night
They tourture, then kill
Condemned to living hell
Crestfallen, Vampiric Acid

I really love the poem!!

thanx...which one?

here is one i just put together the other day

Look at her smile
big and bright
i see through her eyes
that she frowns inside
why dont they see
her pain
black cloud that follows
above her head
rain falls down
her make up runs
they see her pain
runs down her face
it wasnt rain
they were her tears
she cannot hide
she cannot fake
anymore

She screams in silence


why cant they hear my silence screams,
the pain that is a permanent picture on my face,
the tears i cry until i sleep,
my attitude shows my hate,
at life and death,
and everything inbetween,
why cant they hear my silent screams,
heed my pain,
wheres the the shoulder i need,
to cry and hold till im okay,
where are the ears,
to hear my screams of pain,
what happened to everyone,
i pushed away what i need most,
a friend,
one thats real,
and understands,
does such a person exsist,
not that i can find,
so i will always be,
a broken, misunderstood,
MONSTER

The Vampire Acid

thanx thats my favorite....i love vamps they are so sexy i only wish they were real

Hated By The World

why do ppl hate me...am i too real, and too honest, dont ppl want honesty?
i dont understand...
whats wrong with being outspoken
i only say what i mean
im only true to me
why do ppl take words so seriously?
they are only words
they said i was a bully
im not a bully
i was the bullied
im so lost
no room for hate
myabe i should stick to freaks
its where i belong
among the underbelly
the rejected freaks
is what i am
this is what i am
deal with it
stop complaining
you dont have to like me
i dont have to like you
dont change me
im not so hard to to make friends
if you are real and true
i have a wall built high
to keep out intruders that betray
my heart is broken
dont stomp on it
i dont need you to make me feel bad
i have myself for that
if you need me im there
will you be there when i need you?
friends are few
will you be mine?

I love vampires too!! You're a wonderful writer.

thank you....do you write?

Yes I do write. I write GSB made up stories, and some poems. My favorite poem that I have writen is War.

i am in the middle of writing a story for on here but i cant seem to write a short one so im gonna take my time and make it good..im more into writing lyrics than poetry but my lyrics are poetic,..the unhappy girl one is lyrics i just made it into a poem...im going to write some of my better stuff later...where can i read your war poem or can you post it here

this one is not much a peom but more of my thoughts and frustrations ....can you read and give me your thoughts

My life is nothing, how could it be considered a life when i do nothing. No friends , No fun, No Future. Just sit around all day doing nothing. I am nothing. Life had broken me. Lost the biggest person in my life. The only one who understood me fully. Where do i go from here? Im lifeless and broken. No one to talk to. No one understands. Not like she did. So i light another smoke. Wish i could have another toke. She would have hated me doing it. That is if i had told her. I want to be better for her. Its all she wanted. She gave happiness when there was none. Shelter from the world. My only friend when i had none. Brightened my world of darkness and shadows. With her big bright yellow smile. She gave hope and love, when i had none. Why did he take her away. Didnt he know i needed her. How will i go on. Without her to guide me. How will i know where to go, what to say, who to be. I am me. She made me the better person i should be. Lonely and lost. Where do i fit in this world? Here? No not here. I hate it here, too many memories. No one can replace her. Who will fill the void? Who will be my everything? She was my mom, my dad, my best friend, my nurse, my chef, but first and foremost my GRAMMA.
She was an angel if i ever saw one. Beautiful and amazing. The greatest human who ever lived. She taught me everything. How to live, how to love, how to hope, how to cope, how to be the best me i can. I am who i am because of her. Without her i am empty, and lifeless. Im no longer me. A big piece of me died with her. The only piece of happiness i had. Gramma i miss you so much. If i had one wish id bring you back, or be brough to you. I never realised just how important you were. Id have done anything for you. Id have died so you could live. God knows you deserved to more than me. You changed my life, in your death. I want so much to make you proud. But i fear i never will. How can i be as good as you? You left so much to live up to. But i want to be just like you. Live life just like you. But i never will be just like you. Always a heartbeat away. I want to come home to you. But im not ready. I just want to see you, hug you, kiss you one more time. Hear your voice. Just one more time. One day when we meet again. I'll see your heavenly face and hear your angelic laugh and we will be togather forever. I miss you, and love you more than life itself. Rest in peace Gramma.
April 7/37-June 17/06
Mood:Lost in life
Music:Him-Vampire Heart

Uhm, do not use shorthand in lyrics or poetry. Use some more punctuation. Also, using curse words can only really be captured to full effect by very good writers, even then it often looks out of place. If you follow my advice then you will improve.

I love it!! Here is my poem War

http://www.geekstinkbreath.net/board/viewtopic.php?t=45913

Jinxed and Rejected:

this one is not much a peom but more of my thoughts and frustrations ....can you read and give me your thoughts

My life is nothing, how could it be considered a life when i do nothing. No friends , No fun, No Future. Just sit around all day doing nothing. I am nothing. Life had broken me. Lost the biggest person in my life. The only one who understood me fully. Where do i go from here? Im lifeless and broken. No one to talk to. No one understands. Not like she did. So i light another smoke. Wish i could have another toke. She would have hated me doing it. That is if i had told her. I want to be better for her. Its all she wanted. She gave happiness when there was none. Shelter from the world. My only friend when i had none. Brightened my world of darkness and shadows. With her big bright yellow smile. She gave hope and love, when i had none. Why did he take her away. Didnt he know i needed her. How will i go on. Without her to guide me. How will i know where to go, what to say, who to be. I am me. She made me the better person i should be. Lonely and lost. Where do i fit in this world? Here? No not here. I hate it here, too many memories. No one can replace her. Who will fill the void? Who will be my everything? She was my mom, my dad, my best friend, my nurse, my chef, but first and foremost my GRAMMA.
She was an angel if i ever saw one. Beautiful and amazing. The greatest human who ever lived. She taught me everything. How to live, how to love, how to hope, how to cope, how to be the best me i can. I am who i am because of her. Without her i am empty, and lifeless. Im no longer me. A big piece of me died with her. The only piece of happiness i had. Gramma i miss you so much. If i had one wish id bring you back, or be brough to you. I never realised just how important you were. Id have done anything for you. Id have died so you could live. God knows you deserved to more than me. You changed my life, in your death. I want so much to make you proud. But i fear i never will. How can i be as good as you? You left so much to live up to. But i want to be just like you. Live life just like you. But i never will be just like you. Always a heartbeat away. I want to come home to you. But im not ready. I just want to see you, hug you, kiss you one more time. Hear your voice. Just one more time. One day when we meet again. I'll see your heavenly face and hear your angelic laugh and we will be togather forever. I miss you, and love you more than life itself. Rest in peace Gramma.
April 7/37-June 17/06
Mood:Lost in life
Music:Him-Vampire Heart

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That's what your journal is for.

nm i see the link now....duh im dumb

Jinxed and Rejected:

nm i see the link now....duh im dumb

Nah it's okay. You just need to learn the ropes yo

Here's one of my made up stories called The Diary Of Billie Joe

http://www.geekstinkbreath.net/fan/story/6393/0/

Bat_Country_Chick:

Here's one of my made up stories called The Diary Of Billie Joe

http://www.geekstinkbreath.net/fan/story/6393/0/

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Please don't spam.
See number three

And Jinxed and Rejected, I forgot to say, Don't give up writing