Tough Love

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GrEeNdAyMuSiC77
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
GrEeNdAyMuSiC77
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August 21st, 2006 at 06:14pm
Tough Love

This love is tough when your not giving enough/ all the times we would laugh/ we ranked high on the graph/ I couldn’t see through to find the real side of you/

Oblivious to the pain/ as you drove me insane/ brought me down to hell/ and watched as I fell/

Memories in my mind are erased/ the ideas this relationship are based/ wrapped up in love tighter than a glove/ chewed up and spit out by the gods who shout at the misfits and dropouts/

Oblivious to the pain/ as you drove me insane/ brought me down to hell/ and watched as I fell/

Choking on the truth/ as you lie to me in the phone booth/strike the match to the rope/ I’m giving up my last hope/trying to get your approval/ trying not to be the removal/

Oblivious to the pain/ as you drove me insane/ brought me down to hell/ and watched as I fell/

Reminiscing over the past/ when we never came in last/

Oblivious to the pain/ as you drove me insane/ brought me down to hell/ and watched as I fell/

You don’t have to be this way and now you know you can’t live in yesterday/
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Inari
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538
August 22nd, 2006 at 05:45am
That's awesome, but it would be a whole lot easier to read if it was set into verses/stanzas.

I loved it though.
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