May I Be Your Queen?

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newagecarny
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newagecarny
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Mibba
August 22nd, 2006 at 02:49pm
Yeah, I suck.

May I be your queen?

You are nothing but a miserable excuse for a realist,
A one man crowd and an outcast, diffident blasphemy.
If I was to be cornered would you screen my every move?

I am out of your league. A league of your own.
I crawl for a trinity of the little, overlooked words -
So carelessly buried in your benighted, soil vocabulary.

Such an unexpected move in this closing game of chess,
Only a mysterious twitch and a kiss goodbye.
You leave me no prerogative. You leave me no castle.



Note: 'Castle' as in interchanging the positions of the king and a rook in a game of chess. Although it may be percepted in many ways.
ladyramone
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August 22nd, 2006 at 02:52pm
Hug it's awesome ella
=]
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Inari
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Posts: 2538
August 22nd, 2006 at 02:53pm
That's awesome.
Loving the tone and attitude.
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
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Mibba
August 22nd, 2006 at 04:13pm
I absolutely adore all the ideas put into that. You have too much talent. =D
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Peter Petrelli
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Posts: 4161
August 23rd, 2006 at 06:44am
Shocked It's gorgeous. Actually, it's amazing.
snowcherry
King For A Couple Of Days
snowcherry
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Posts: 3912
August 23rd, 2006 at 09:10am
That's cool,
like everything you write. Wink
i worship billie joe
Falling In Love With The Board
i worship billie joe
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August 23rd, 2006 at 11:13am
thats really good
rollerpig
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rollerpig
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August 23rd, 2006 at 12:14pm
Well done! Cool
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