Untamed by Fame

KK a Work in progress but still need opinions, so I wont scrap it.

Untamed by Fame

Fans come up to her
She makes them smile
They’ll love her so much
Just for a while

But I’m kinda confused
By how she seems
Her skin it turns to steel
And it looks mean

Chorus
Cause every little thing
seems to make her crumble
And she does everything
So that she wont tumble
Should I gamble everything
Just for a rumble?
Cause I want my life
I don’t want hers

I walk down the street
It’s so alone
And with my privacy
I whine and groan

But then I think about
how it feels to be like her
It must suck to be
So known in this world

Chorus
Cause every little thing
About her they all know
And she does everything
So that the pain wont show
Should I gamble everything
So my life just blows?
Cause I want my life
I don’t want hers

Bridge
Cause I’m underrated
I’m underestimated
I’m an undefined girl
Cause I’m super-matic
I’m awesome-atic
I’m just living in this world
I want everything
And want nothing
It makes me wanna hurl
I’m just me alone
leave me the fuck alone
I’m just a girl
Untamed by Fame

Another Innocent Kali:

Cause every little thing
seems to make her crumble
And she does everything
So that she wont tumble
Should I gamble everything
Just for a rumble?
Cause I want my life
I don’t want hers

The last two lines throw it off a bit, but it's good.

I love the rest <3.

thanks
I wasnt sure how to end it
So I'll rethink the ending

You already know my opinion. ^_^

That Punk Kid.:

You already know my opinion. ^_^

^^ thank you!