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FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
 | September 2nd, 2006 at 06:17pm I'm trying to gain my writing back, but I'm not sure it's working.
Derailed Into Greyscale
I tried taking out the color
To make it that much brighter,
But it never seemed illogical to me.
I’m color blind and I don’t know it;
Everywhere I look there’s a rainbow.
It’s just the spectrum of my own confusion.
This loud noise is killing my ears,
Car crash with just a touch of static.
The screen has never been a clear picture.
Bits of broken glass have gotten stuck
In between any and all thoughts;
You were too late for me. |
The.Crazed.Spork
Jackass
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1167 | September 2nd, 2006 at 06:31pm I like it.
=] |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | September 3rd, 2006 at 05:41am That's cool.
I love the whole idea through it.
Really creative. |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | September 3rd, 2006 at 06:05am Fantastic. We've been being deproved of your talent for far too long. I just love the way you can work with words and make every single one your own. |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| September 3rd, 2006 at 06:10am The second stanza is absolutely gorgeous. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| September 3rd, 2006 at 12:48pm Aw, thank all you guys. I lurve you.  |
lyrical_mess
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 5278
 | September 3rd, 2006 at 01:41pm The third verse is the best one. Shtatic, yo. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| September 3rd, 2006 at 02:29pm Thank you.  |
What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2451
| September 8th, 2006 at 08:18am *is jealous* I love your way with words. It’s a really interesting poem.
Yeah, I’m back. My GSB pause is officially over. I forgot to tell you about my pause?
Well, that’s because it wasn’t planed. It was due to some personal reasons. =P
But now I’m back! You do remember me right? Right? |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| September 8th, 2006 at 02:41pm alksdfjjd Rose! 
I was wondering where you've been!  Thank you, oh dearest soulmate. |
[Your Best Mistake]
Idiot
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 551 | September 8th, 2006 at 02:44pm I love it! It's brilliant! |
What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2451
| September 8th, 2006 at 04:37pm Hardcore Panda!!1:alksdfjjd Rose!
I was wondering where you've been! Thank you, oh dearest soulmate.
I've been away, and on a break from life sorta. From the world outside.
And you're very welcome, my most beloved soulmate |
snowcherry
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 3912 | September 10th, 2006 at 03:08am What's in a name?:*is jealous* I love your way with words. It’s a really interesting poem.
Yeah, I’m back. My GSB pause is officially over. I forgot to tell you about my pause?
Well, that’s because it wasn’t planed. It was due to some personal reasons. =P
But now I’m back! You do remember me right? Right?
Sure we remember you 
Welcome back, I'm happy to see you again.
Even though I'm in a bit of a GSB pause, so you won't see me
here often,
but I'm still glad you're back. 
The poem's really creative.
I like the way it's written. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| September 10th, 2006 at 11:29am Thank youuu. |
Rhiannon.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 2999
| September 10th, 2006 at 01:30pm love it. |
JOOLS
Addict
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 11676
| September 10th, 2006 at 03:45pm It made me feel confused... Like not that the poem was confusing, but it really tapped into my mind and made me feel like the subject of the poem..
It is wonderful:] |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| September 10th, 2006 at 04:24pm Haha wow, you guys are still commenting this. Thanks to everyone who did. |
