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King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 3663 | September 4th, 2006 at 08:12pm the empty feeling of being alone
hurts so bad
and its something i cant controle
iv tried so hard to forget
the memories once known as "us"
Lets fold the pages back
and start from scratch
close our eyes and take a deep breath
friends forever is what we said
so lets see if we can start over again |
St Beth
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 50 | September 4th, 2006 at 08:40pm ooo it´s a nice poem and u meke me think about my best friends i hope my friendship with ´em never ends  |
Dead End Girl
Addict
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 10219 | September 4th, 2006 at 10:23pm The flow is off in some spots.
Also, I'd go over the spelling.
Decent overall. |
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King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 3663 | September 5th, 2006 at 04:15pm esh sorry i never ment to send this last night
because i hadnt finished it but i was writting it
and wasnt suposed to be online and i heard my mum getting up so i just clicked send so i didnt lose it
ill finish it tomorow xx thanks thou |
tomamazon
GSBitch
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 68084
  | September 5th, 2006 at 04:17pm ...
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I'm sorry but its cliché. |
