robotchicken.
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 | September 5th, 2006 at 02:22am What about me?, Nine months that cannot be
Just an accident, another broken accident
Nothing that cant be solved, not a human, cant evolve
If my mother told me I should have been an abortion,
would I cry or applaud the freedom of her body?
You cant feel, think, love me, no emotions
Tiny cell, give it a chance, its my body
I dont want want to wake up in the middle of the night
Clutch your tiny being, calm away the fright
I dont want to make beautiful memories with you, or watch you grow
Thinking about aborting you, painful secret no one will know
You could regret your life if I let you live and give you away
But I dont know if that future is coming your way
Not yet grown myself,Dreams used to always change
Then again I didnt do this by myself, Biggest dream to re-arrange
"You're Not Alive"
This is what I have to say, Making it easier this way
Should I kill all my mistakes?
If I cheat on my husband can I kill my lover?
Just for the future, Every little breath you take
I cry everytime you say "I love you, mother"
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I wouldnt call this thread or forum a place to speak about abortion. So I will not state my direct views on it. However, I wanted to write this poem out of inspiration from the Abortion thread in the Specific Discussion forum. I just fuond myself thinking about a girl in that situation and what she would do. I guess I slanted more on what I would do. I dont expect all to like this or to call it a proper poem, it was either going to be a poem or a letter and now where would I post that? So comments are all good. Good or Bad. |
Sara.
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Posts: 31155 | September 5th, 2006 at 02:25am 
I loved it! |
robotchicken.
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| September 5th, 2006 at 02:28am thank you. I find it really sad :/ i myself cried writing it but im just an emotional person ._. |
lyrical_mess
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 | September 5th, 2006 at 06:17am Marry me. That was beautiful and it was really graceful, and at the same time kind of edgy. I love your wording and I looooove the way you just really softly and emotionally presented such a huge issue. |
robotchicken.
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| September 5th, 2006 at 07:40pm Thank you ^_^ |
Whitney.
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Posts: 507 | September 5th, 2006 at 07:51pm Wow very good...I luved it :]]]]
Good job |
ace.
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Posts: 764 | September 5th, 2006 at 10:50pm boo.
this is really good. youve grown a lot as a writer. and yah. i like its monologue-esque qualities. which i told you already but i know its more fun to get commented on. so here ya go.
bye. |
robotchicken.
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| September 6th, 2006 at 12:00am thank you ace <3 |
Garrett Hanlund
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| September 6th, 2006 at 12:02am I loved it.
Jesus, you made me cry  |
radioactive
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| September 6th, 2006 at 07:25am Wow, that was...flippin awsome, beautiful, powerful, i just confused myself..you pick one. |
robotchicken.
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| September 6th, 2006 at 06:51pm thank you all for the nice comments ^_^ |
