radioactive
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 338
 | September 11th, 2006 at 03:40am She cant seem to think strait,
Her mind is somewhere else,
Cutting herself,
And shes just fourteen,
She cant see strait,
Her visions blurred,
And Shes falling.
Calling for help.
But noone knows she exists.
Her parents disown her,
Wishing for someone to save her,
For the violence to stop,
it hurts to know.
Embarresing bruises to hide,
Long sleeve shirts cover scars she hides,
Hiding her tears from the ones who care the most,
Teddy bear is the only one who holds her close,
She wishes.
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I wrote this in like 10 minutes, i'm still working on it, I just wanted to know what people think so far.
-Desi |
radioactive
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 338
| September 12th, 2006 at 03:15am no one likes it =[ |
rolypoly_punk
Idiot
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 627 | September 12th, 2006 at 10:19pm I like it. Pretty good! It could flow more though...  |
rollerpig
GSBitch
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 62283 | September 13th, 2006 at 09:09am Sorry, I don't like it.
... You can do better. |
