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newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
 | September 11th, 2006 at 09:12am I love you. ;_;
I wish I could carry your unjust burning on my shoulders.
I know I can lift it easier than my own.
And this bucket of tears that blind me for mercy.
And block out the words 'We all die alone'.
I can choke my screaming, but not my words.
They escape from my lips and smash against the cage.
And return to the paper, as lifeless as these eyes;
Red, just like the wine and all my boiling rage.
I'm too ashamed to cry and confess my sins.
The queen of all fools - I should be crowned.
I love but your god just isn't on my side.
I hope to die before I hit the ground. |
rollerpig
GSBitch
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 62283 | September 11th, 2006 at 09:15am Wow. o_o |
Bittersweet World
Banned
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 28301
 | September 11th, 2006 at 09:17am The talent pluses threw you, now doesnt it? O__O
That was beautifu, heartbreaking and heartfelt Ella. ;__; |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| September 11th, 2006 at 09:19am Thank you both. |
clark
GSBitch
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Posts: 79047 | September 11th, 2006 at 09:35am Wow.
Even if you don't agree, I still think you're probably like the most amazing writer I know, and things like this proves it.
I really do hope things turn out better sooner or later. |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | September 11th, 2006 at 11:24am Gorgeous, truely gorgeous. |
girl almighty
GSBitch
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 76615 | September 11th, 2006 at 11:30am Just wow. Turbulent but amazing. |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | September 11th, 2006 at 12:36pm Wow that is incredibly beautiful.
I love the last verse. |
tomamazon
GSBitch
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 68084
| September 11th, 2006 at 01:31pm ..Elluhz. That was bloody amazing. Beautifully written.
Gah. I love the last line on the first verse.
Thank you for giving that us Ella. WTF. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| September 11th, 2006 at 03:22pm Sad, but absolutely amazing all the same. Iloveit.  |
radioactive
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 338
| September 12th, 2006 at 03:25am Amazing.
Vondarfall darling.
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newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| September 16th, 2006 at 12:57pm Thank you  |
Addison Montgomery.
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 7078
| September 16th, 2006 at 01:16pm It's great love ze name Boris by ze way. |
B.J
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: -
Gender: Male
Posts: 8105 | September 16th, 2006 at 01:42pm fucking amazing Ella
as usual I hate your talents
and love you |
igotsosickofcrying
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 3206 | September 16th, 2006 at 02:42pm It's amazing...i love it(and the last two lines are really close to my heart) |
