His eyes were killing her

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bi_bu_ra Rotting On Here Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 49428	September 16th, 2006 at 08:00am She knew that running away can never help but her only friend told her to do that His blue eyes saw the pain inside her body and ears could hear the screaming in her head Moments when they were alone in the dark were leaving red color on her ashamed face Blood mixed with alcohol and lungs full of grey smoke Didn't make her enemies in her head to away but they made her full of self-confidence She forgot about respect when she was standing on the corner with a smal handbag in her hand And when she went into the car with the first guy who winked to her She ruined that little bit of respect and trust in the blue eyes of her true love
peas lover. King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 3502	September 16th, 2006 at 09:55am Great job I liked it a lot.
bi_bu_ra Rotting On Here Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 49428	September 16th, 2006 at 04:13pm Thanks.
Lissie! Falling In Love With The Board Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 7305	September 16th, 2006 at 04:31pm It's really cool. I mean, it's so... so... Yeah. I love it Keep up the awesome job!
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	September 16th, 2006 at 05:18pm That's so sad. But beautiful.
Lor!AtTheBlackParade Geek Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 124	September 16th, 2006 at 05:33pm thats amazing
igotsosickofcrying King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3206	September 17th, 2006 at 05:00am Moments when they were alone in the dark were leaving red color on her ashamed face She ruined that little bit of respect and trust in the blue eyes of her true love I love it
rollerpig GSBitch Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283	September 17th, 2006 at 05:17am Amazing, Bilka.
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	September 17th, 2006 at 06:09am Inari: That's so sad. But beautiful.
*i_is_lucy* Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 8	September 17th, 2006 at 06:22am cool....awesome... =]
Sneki Falling In Love With The Board Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 6737	September 17th, 2006 at 07:26am Sad But beautiful.
Melissa. Jackass Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 1260	September 17th, 2006 at 07:51pm Your good at writing poems. Great job.
bi_bu_ra Rotting On Here Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 49428	September 18th, 2006 at 03:25pm Thank you all.
Hilda the Hag Geek Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 130	September 18th, 2006 at 03:30pm whoa.i really liked it,have you published your work anywhere?you totlally should.
bi_bu_ra Rotting On Here Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 49428	September 18th, 2006 at 03:41pm No I haven't. o_o Do you think my poetry is that good?

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