Uh... hah

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DudeO
King For A Couple Of Days
DudeO
Age: 31
Gender: Male
Posts: 2543

Mibba
September 20th, 2006 at 03:22pm
Its hard to be you
when there's no style of own
its hard to be noticed
when the worlds full of clones
its hard to fit in
when your feeling alone
its hard to get out
when your chances are blown

welcome to reality
where individuality
is a style that everyone wears
A place without feeling
unless its appealing
...

I can't think of anything else. I want to write music to it though.

Rates?

I also wrote some little things that I cant fit into a poem, and you can rate them too if you want-

How much more censoring
can this world take?
Dont say that, dont do that
just give us a break!
Creativity cut off at the roots
So that words rearange till it all follows suit


and

I caught you
you lost me
I found you
you scratched me
I punched you
you hugged me
you said that you loved me

(...)

Hah- and this when I was bored.

How pathetic can I be?
Evne the voices in my head have stopped talking to me
The problems are crawling all over my skin
and it just makes me want to give up and give in

SO... what to do you think?
ladyramone
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ladyramone
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Posts: 21701
September 20th, 2006 at 03:24pm
lmfao i love that!

it's very, i don't even have the word for it. but i like it a lot, honestly
DudeO
King For A Couple Of Days
DudeO
Age: 31
Gender: Male
Posts: 2543

Mibba
September 20th, 2006 at 03:27pm
Protest.:
lmfao i love that!

it's very, i don't even have the word for it. but i like it a lot, honestly


Yay!
DudeO
King For A Couple Of Days
DudeO
Age: 31
Gender: Male
Posts: 2543

Mibba
September 23rd, 2006 at 01:10pm
Hah. I didnt want to post it again, so here. I'll just post and hope some more people see it. After it doesnt work again I promise to shut up.

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