what just happened (Dreaming)?

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[Broken Pretty]
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[Broken Pretty]
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 572
September 21st, 2006 at 07:20am
the last few poems i have posted no one has commented in the slightest, okay, maybe they suck but i dont know if they do or not.
i dont think this one is great but i foggure why not post it and see if any one read it.
i have a few more im writting and written that ill post also (if you care).

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what just happened (dreaming)?


grinning a mile wide
feeling six feet tall
smelling the roses
waking me up and thinking you're beside me
could be the best feeling i could ever imagine.

the touch of your hands
your lips on my own
the natural tensioj between us
do you think something is happening?

everything becomes louder to my ears
just you and me, alone
funny, this feeling
do you feel it?

shaking,
moving about,
its only me,
that blasted alarm clock always runs my dreams.

looking to the left of me
you're still there.
what justy happened?
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