The Doctor Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 8786
 | September 23rd, 2006 at 08:26am Mmkay, new project. I am gonna write a series of poems...that tell a story. Like a poetic version of a concept album. Chaa. This is part 9.
Procastination- Interlude {ix}
The mission is half complete,
and I'm left half empty.
I can taste the shattered glass
scratching at my throat
like a cat grooming it's claws.
The fireflies disturb my sleep and
romantic notions interupt my dreams.
The battle ground is set, the trenches
have been dug out. The soil is reserved
for the numerous, speedy burials.
Perhaps now is the time, for me
to bow out of the cause? To spend my
days in a safe white cell having morning
tea with Holden and Esther? |
ancient Had A Life Before GSB
 Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 29697
 | September 23rd, 2006 at 12:53pm yeah so uh. this is all like really good and all. seriously. amazing.
really creative.
But I can't help but to say this:
Did you not notice that you spelled procrastination wrong, or did you mean to do that? o_O |
[Your Best Mistake] Idiot
![[Your Best Mistake]](/data/board-avatars/empty.gif) Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 551 | September 23rd, 2006 at 12:57pm Loved it. *Tips hat* |
Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | September 23rd, 2006 at 02:25pm Shorter but definately not lacking the beauty that the others have. |
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | September 23rd, 2006 at 03:13pm Agree completely. I absolutely love it as much as I've loved everything so far. |
The Doctor Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 8786
 | September 24th, 2006 at 11:37am Bedroom Gangsta:yeah so uh. this is all like really good and all. seriously. amazing.
really creative.
But I can't help but to say this:
Did you not notice that you spelled procrastination wrong, or did you mean to do that? o_O I realised that I misspelt it, and to be quite frank, meh, I don't care. I write poetry, not dictionaries. I don't think I should be bothered with something so...facile. Poetry, in my opinion, is meant to display something you are thinking about, with the certain bounderies in certain styles of poems. I don't bother with spell checker because it screws with my head. I'll fix it if it bothers you. |
Insurgentes Post Whore
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 23688
| September 24th, 2006 at 03:25pm Could it get any better? o_o |