heywhatnow
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 9971
 | September 23rd, 2006 at 12:52pm This is my first somewhat decent piece of writing so I'd appreciate any advice.
Your cousin's getting married
and you're on a plane.
I wonder how you could even survive one day.
Confined to your seat,
isn't your bottom numb?
Your neighbour forgot to pick up your mail,
and you're on the plane.
Destination: nowhere,
a tourist attraction to all.
The washroom line up's too long,
so you soiled your pants instead of waiting.
What time did you say it was?
Did we cross the Canadian border?
Could I get some of that O.J.?
"Sir, what did you say you'd like to order?"
Your lover's missing you greatly,
and you're still on this plane.
Fifteen new voice messages
are just waiting to be heard.
But instead you wonder what the people below you
are doing, feeling, and saying, back on the ground.
What kind of entertainment is this?
You've already seen this episode of Gilligan's Island.
Is there a better way to travel?
'Cause I know you'd want to try it,
I'm here with you,
and we're on this plane.
I may represent the strange in stranger,
but I hope you don't mind if I lean on your shoulder. |
ladyramone
Post Whore
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 21701 | September 23rd, 2006 at 12:54pm 
ILOVEIT.
flows well and everything.  |
rollerpig
GSBitch
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 62283 | September 23rd, 2006 at 01:32pm I like it! Sounds like a song.. |
Bleach
Rotting On Here
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 47505 | September 23rd, 2006 at 07:32pm Thats the shit.  |
