Orgy
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Posts: 179 | September 25th, 2006 at 07:18pm And so begins another entry,
Another entry to our life.
And you'll begin another story,
Another story with your lies.
It's another day, a second chance,
To get things right, to make us last.
And so we begin another entry,
Emtry to our lives.
Another story, a story to mix with your lies,
And so this is our second chance,
To try and make, to make this last. |
Orgy
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Age: 34
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Posts: 179 | September 25th, 2006 at 07:50pm Anyone? |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
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 | September 25th, 2006 at 08:03pm The flow was brilliant in the first two stanzas. The third was a bit sketchy. Not so unique subject matter, but it worked well. |
Billiexisxsex
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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Posts: 7 | September 25th, 2006 at 11:22pm i really liked it. |
Orgy
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Age: 34
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Posts: 179 | September 26th, 2006 at 09:35pm Thanx ^-^ |
