Billiexisxsex
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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Gender: -
Posts: 7 | September 25th, 2006 at 11:21pm Razor blades on my wrist
Mix my feelings
With a twist
The pain of him
And the razor blade
This is a sin
But my memory fades
Why should i care
What you think
I took the dare
And the direct link
You fooled my mind
And my heart
Left me to find
Us falling apart
Even tho we never were
You still caused
My stomach to flur
Razor blades apon my foot
You had to make
This so hard put
Just like a stake
Driving it thro my heart
And to think
I just had to start
These feelings of mine
Im sorry to say
I dont feel fine
My nerves start to fray
Razor blades meet my neck
This is gonna be
A very big wreck
But i dont care
I gave up long ago
You wont be here to stare
As all my blood flows
Razor blades done there job
Please when im gone
Nobody sob
I was a waste of time
And your thoughts
Listen to the chime
Of that old clock
It says forget
And dont look back
Dont regret
And youll be ok jack
Razor blades bloody and dull
Lay upon
Her fragile skull |
Sara.
This Board Is My Home
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Posts: 31155 | September 26th, 2006 at 12:04am Cliche` |
dancepaigeydance;
Geek
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Posts: 118
 | September 26th, 2006 at 12:19am fuck! thats good. *claps* =] |
Merci Pour Le Venin
Idiot
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Posts: 662 | September 26th, 2006 at 12:21am OMF i LOVE it |
bkwrm37[Duckie!!]
Geek
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 200 | September 26th, 2006 at 01:21am That's...thet's really good. And really sad. :'( |
TRE IS DA BOMB!!! [Blue]
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 24 | September 26th, 2006 at 01:24am =;[ how sad... |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
 | September 26th, 2006 at 07:07am Cliché and too choppy. |
The Doctor
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 8786
| September 26th, 2006 at 11:03am ...I like the choppiness, just the cliché stuff and the rhyme scheme put me off.
keep it up  |
