The life

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Billiexisxsex Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 7	September 25th, 2006 at 11:28pm Who are you and who am I? We grow up just to find out we die. Is this really worth living? Is this really worth a life? We live in suffering, pain, strife. Is this what we want? Is this the price? If it is I dont want the life.
Sara. This Board Is My Home Age: - Gender: - Posts: 31155	September 26th, 2006 at 12:04am um... K. Good.. ?
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	September 26th, 2006 at 07:07am This is a section for poetry. Explain why you posted that here, please.
The Doctor Falling In Love With The Board Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 8786	September 26th, 2006 at 11:02am I think the poet needs to work on paragraphing. Example :- Who are you and who am I? We grow up just to find out we die. Is this really worth living? Is this really worth a life? We live in suffering, pain, strife. Is this what we want? Is this the price? If it is, I dont want the life. I know, unexpected paragraphing but I like it like that. Or... Who are you and who am I? We grow up just to find out we die. Is this really worth living? Is this really worth a life? We live in suffering, pain, strife. Is this what we want? Is this the price? If it is, I dont want the life. either or, depending on taste.
Billiexisxsex Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 7	September 26th, 2006 at 07:05pm i didnt have time to put it like that. i had to get off quickly.
The Doctor Falling In Love With The Board Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 8786	September 27th, 2006 at 11:27am Billiexisxsex: i didnt have time to put it like that. i had to get off quickly. That's fine, you can just edit it now

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