wait_what
Geek
Age: 38
Gender: Female
Posts: 411
  | September 27th, 2006 at 02:51pm As smirks of broken dreams
appeal to your heart, you
adorn your flaws with the
ignorance that no one could
quite understand. The millions
of the impious choked you from
inside – feeding from you until
you burst from the laughter of
time. The apex comes too early, but
it was much too premature for you.
Clocks distort reality into chaos,
but you- you were unrivaled until the
last
nauseating
thud
reverberated like a knife. |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | September 27th, 2006 at 02:59pm 
I love it. I especially love how you separated the last few words from each other, and especially the lines;
'The apex comes too early, but
it was much too premature for you.' |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | September 27th, 2006 at 03:13pm Every line, every image is sheer beauty. |
