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rage;love;clark
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 494 | September 27th, 2006 at 04:53pm this is about my dad
it's gay
You can hit me till I whimper like a bleeding dog
You can take from me until everything is gone
You can put a stop to this young boy’s life
I’ll never be strong enough to make it right
You can get my hopes up just to crash them down
Act as nothing ever happened and we’re all pals
But behind the façade is a lonely face
To cope with this plight, he ruins my days
What am I gonna do?
When people ask about you
Do I tell them what you do to me
Tell them what you do to me
What do I have to do?
To finally get it through
Do I have to tell you bold and true
I don’t love you |
Watoosh!
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 281 | September 27th, 2006 at 04:55pm well, now that i know the sexual preference of your song, i can go on living happily  |
rage;love;clark
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 494 | September 27th, 2006 at 04:57pm Watoosh!:well, now that i know the sexual preference of your song, i can go on living happily
wow, like sounding smarter than other people much? it's just a phrase, get used to it. i feel like shit, and get a life besides sage-ing people on the internet. and please, comment on the song |
Dead End Girl
Addict
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 10219 | September 27th, 2006 at 07:42pm The second part is pretty iffy.
And please. Stop using gay as a synonym for dumb.
It makes you sound ignorant.
No matter how much you like it. |
Miss_Minority039
Geek
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 332
 | September 27th, 2006 at 08:14pm tis good |
I Am So Beautiful! FUCK!
Jackass
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1019
| September 28th, 2006 at 12:09pm I like it. |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | September 28th, 2006 at 01:33pm I really liked it.  The first part flowed awesomely well.
I don't really care a damn about you using the word gay... it's your life...  |
tomamazon
GSBitch
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 68084
 | September 28th, 2006 at 02:29pm Watoosh!:well, now that i know the sexual preference of your song, i can go on living happily
Hey, leave him/her alone!
He/she's going through a hard time, so you should at least cut him some slack.
So what if he used gay? It was probably just a one off. Jeez
K, poem. I loved it. It was brilliant. Maybe it'd go good as a song? |
Milk
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 3741
| September 28th, 2006 at 04:04pm It's different, I'll give you that. I thought it was too short, but whatever. Writing about something like that takes alot of guts. Congrats. |
skittelzster
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: Male
Posts: 266 | September 28th, 2006 at 07:33pm Dead End Girl:The second part is pretty iffy.
And please. Stop using gay as a synonym for dumb.
It makes you sound ignorant.
No matter how much you like it.
I agree about that DO NOT USE the word GAY in place of dumb VERY ignorant! |
rage;love;clark
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 494 | September 28th, 2006 at 10:00pm alright gize, i'm sorry about gay
thanks for those who like it
and thanks for those who don't like it for criticism |
