Billiexisxsex
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 7 | September 27th, 2006 at 08:27pm Whats wrong with me?
What cant you accept?
That im different
That Im Gothic?
No?
How 'bout punk?
That I'm not a "little girl"
Your "little girl"
So you wont accept me?
Thats all i ever looked for
From you
Acceptance
But you wont
Will you?
Im not perfect
I know
I can accept it
How 'bout you?
I guess not
You yell
You tourcher me
Scream at me
Call me names
Just because
Im not who you want me to be
And to think
All i ever looked for
Was Acceptance |
Dead End Girl
Addict
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 10219 | September 27th, 2006 at 08:28pm Their is very little flow and it's pretty cliche.
I'd keep writing though  |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | September 28th, 2006 at 02:27pm Didn't like it, too cliched and too choppy. And 'bout isn't a real word. |
