Courtney 5 (Really Long (600 Words or more))
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| rage;love;clark Geek  Age: - Gender: - Posts: 494 | Without you I’d be helpless. I need you here to guide the way. With your smile and your love that never lets me go sad. If I didn’t have you I would fall into death. I need the smell of your hair when you hug me, the look of your lips when you kiss me. I need the sweet beauty you grace me with when you’re in my presence. I need the way you make the cute faces that can melt me simply because you’re perfect. You are perfect for many reasons, but the three main ones are: I love everything she does, I need everything she does, and without her, I would die. I love the way you smile when we start the day. I love the way you look at me when I look at you. Your eyes are so perfect with blue delight and it makes me melt. I love the way you squeeze me and get so close when we hug. It makes me feel like you’re never going to leave me. I love how your beauty can drive me to tears. It has before, and it will again. I love how soft and caring your face is, like an angel who knows everything about me, and is ready to help. I love the way you comfort me when things get so bad it seems like nothing can help. I love the way that you’re the only one I could ever have. I love the way that you said you’d be mine (March 13). Once you go perfect, you never go back. Not only do I love you, I also need you terribly. I need you here by my side, to guide me and hold me. I need you here to comfort me. I am sure without your love, comfort, guidance, compassion, wisdom, humor, practicality, faith (yes even your faith), anger, efficiency, protection, and lust, I would most certainly go astray. You are the only thing that gets me through these tough times that would never recede into light unless you were here. It gives me peace of heart to know that right now, you’re reading something I wrote, because of the qualities listed above. I need everything you give to me, because if I didn’t need it, why would I be taking it? There is a grim truth, that because I need you so much, I would in fact die without you. If you left me I would spiral into something that you can only read about. I would never speak to another human being again, that is, if lived past a minute when you left me. I would scream until my throat bled from exhaustion. I would beat myself until nothing was left of me. I would slit my own throat as soon as possible, for death is better than a life without you. Without your gaze I would go blind. Without your touch I would go numb. Without your voice I would go deaf. What is there for me if there is no you? What am I without you? I am nothing; therefore, if you left me, I would simply have to make myself nothing. Courtney Brhee West, you are everything I could ever ask for, and more. Your unfathomable beauty, your undying graciousness, and your desirable fortitude are what make me tick. Whether or not you want to believe it, I am an empty shell of a man, who needs complete guidance. I am actually nothing, you make me something. So please, whatever you do, never make me “nothing”. Never leave me, you have to promise. You have to promise you’ll continue on with me through all the pain and hardships, because I could only deal with it if I were with you. You are an angel of God, this I am sure of. Now please continue to grace me with your partnership. |
| Dead End Girl Addict  Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 10219 | It seems more like rambling than a poem. I would suggest breaking it up into stanzas, this would make it easier to read. |
| rage;love;clark Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 494 | Dead End Girl: tis not a poem |
| Whitney. Idiot Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 507 | If it's not a poem, than why is it in the YOUR POETRY forum? |
| rage;love;clark Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 494 | Broken Dream: there's no other place that has written work section |
| Whitney. Idiot Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 507 | rage;love;clark: Oh o.k. understood =] |
| Sweeney Todd. GSBitch  Age: - Gender: Male Posts: 63252   | I loved that. |
| rage;love;clark Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 494 | CityLightsLikeRainDance©: thank you she did too! |
| Sweeney Todd. GSBitch Age: - Gender: Male Posts: 63252 | rage;love;clark: Aw thats good.  |
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