can you see through me

can you see through me.

no one knows the real me

but if they looked deeper they could maybe see

who i am and what im about

they just havent relized im harder to figure out

i probably like some things that you do

but you wont give me a chace ,

so you have no clue

i like movies and music and videos on mtv

ive seen concerts of bands you'll never get to see

so im not that pretty and i dont have many friends

but i think i'll be ok in the end

i have my family to back me up and a strong will that never gives up

i have people that are close

even if there far away

hopefully my brotha can come here and stay

my life is complet even with out you

and all the horrible things that you used to do

thoes memories haunt me still to this day

if i had my chance you know what id say

to you and everyone elce

yall can just go fuck yourself



i write alot. i have a book with poems in it.. i only posted the ones that are on my myspace on here.. let me know what you think.. i really love this poem alot. i had given up writting for a while because i hated looking back on how i felt. and this was the first poem i had written sence then.

http://www.myspace.com/goldmind2havok

It was okay.
The flow was good, but somehow it didn't stand up to my expectations.
I dunno.

But keep trying! I see great potential. :]