JOOLS
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  | October 3rd, 2006 at 09:40pm I wish I could see you
wish I could feel you
For what you really are
But I've gotta hide today
I've gotta run today
... I think I'll go some place far
If I spoke too much
If I cared too much
It would be disastrous to say a little
But maybe I'll breathe
Maybe I'll think
... could you imagine a heart less brittle?
But I'm forgetting a bit
I'm still thinking a bit
Though I've disregarded too much
Tomorrow I'll pass you
Tomorrow I'll look for you
...but I'll stand still and let my heart take the punch
<333JULIE |
Ghostie.
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| October 3rd, 2006 at 09:46pm Ooh. Pretty. I likes very, very much. ^^ *10* |
°MorbidRose°
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| October 3rd, 2006 at 09:47pm I really liked it.
I didn't notice the rhyme until the middle of the poem, but it was cool.
:] |
ha_ha_you're_screwed
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| October 3rd, 2006 at 09:54pm wow...... thats awesome....... *cries* i will applaude you tomorrow in school! |
ha_ha_you're_screwed
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| October 3rd, 2006 at 09:56pm wait!! i was confuzzled... your not in my school... but still!! i applaude you!!*clap* |
JOOLS
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| October 3rd, 2006 at 09:59pm  hahaha.. I was like- wait.. what?  Stalker much?
ooo that was funneh!
Thanks for the <3 guys! |
