JOOLS
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Age: 32
Gender: Female
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  | October 8th, 2006 at 11:21am Maybe it's too late
to restore what we've lost
THe future's too uncertain
to regain what we've tossed
Old memories I can't stand
yet can't live without
Would make a grown man cry-
a patient one shout
I'll look back and remember
I'll remember you and me
But I'll not shed a tear-
for we were so happy
The day I look at your face
and somehow keep my composure
I'll look our friendship up
But find a sign: Foreclosure
mmm... tell meh what you think!
<3much! |
GD Addicts Anonymous
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 5896 | October 8th, 2006 at 02:45pm I liked it pretty well... it reminded me of someone while I was reading it.
I have one suggestion though- If I were you instead of 'But I'll not shed a tear' I'd write 'But I won't shed a tear'... I just think it sounds better. |
