Garrett Hanlund This Board Is My Home
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 30801
 | October 8th, 2006 at 11:47pm I wrote this on September 15th. Yeah...
My heart is beating in my stomach.
Echoes throughout my hollow chest.
My lungs were yours to keep,
I kept them clean, they'd help you breathe.
Is it as divine as you imagined?
The beeping of machines,
Death's consistant laughter.
Sweet Lady Death had been watching over you for over a year.
Sir Reaper took his turn.
Remember when we used to talk about staring into the stars?
Now I look up, and see you.
Smiling, for once, finally smiling.
I speak to you every night,
I get no reply, but I know you are listening.
You can finally breathe on your own. |
Cidlet Jackass
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 1712
| October 8th, 2006 at 11:50pm Wow.
Dude, Hannah..
I don't know why you think you don't write good.
That was just amazing. |
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | October 9th, 2006 at 06:23am
I love. |
rollerpig GSBitch
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283 | October 9th, 2006 at 08:02am That's amazing :O ... |
Matt Smith Admin
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 31134
 | October 9th, 2006 at 02:45pm Very touching. |
Garrett Hanlund This Board Is My Home
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 30801
 | October 10th, 2006 at 10:02pm Thank you all so much.
It means a lot. |
The Rev Addict
 Age: 38 Gender: Male Posts: 14004 | October 10th, 2006 at 10:06pm I Love it.
as said above.
its very touching
i hope to read more poems from you  |
ohmygodshutyourbutt Idiot
 Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 769
 | October 10th, 2006 at 10:21pm Sept.12 is my friend Angelo's birthday.
Sept.15 is my friend Kim's birthday.
Weird. |