Unrequited (A Tale of Thoughts)--AU

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October 16th, 2006 at 12:49pm
Sup? I'm back with another AU masterpiece! It started out as a oneshot of Tre's daydream before a concert, but it wouldn't stay as a oneshot.

This is a story of Tre's love for Billie Joe, but it's not written in the conventional style. Each chapter is a different episode, a different setting, different pairings and different thoughts, but each one spirals back to the idea that Tre loves Billie freely, passionately, unconditionally, and always.

However, his love will always remain unrequited. In the very first one, Billie and Mike are a couple and it describes Tre's daydream before a concert. I have a couple of more ideas.

In the next one, it's going to be placed in American Idiot era. Billie Joe and Adrienne are married. And Tre begins to reminisce about the time when he thought he and Billie Joe would be together forever and winds up remembering one fateful night when too many drinks led to love.

I believe the third part will be set just before Insomniac comes out. Tre has his green hair and his love for Billie Joe. Despite his outgoing, hyperactive image, Tre is too timid to tell Billie how he feels and ends up watching in envious tears as Billie and Mike are drawn into each others arms.

I have another idea from a poem I wrote where Green Day is accepting an award and Billie kisses Tre to hype up the crowd, but just laughs and acts like it didn't mean a thing to anyone. But it meant a lot to Tre. Billie will just never know.

Billie will never know.

This is Unrequited, A Tale of Thoughts. A Trillie with a twist, tragedy and heartbreak in every thought.

If you have any ideas you'd like to pitch to me, I'd love to hear them. And you will be fully credited.
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October 19th, 2006 at 02:40pm
Hello, nonexistant readers! I started typing up the second part. Once again, it's not a continuation of part one. It's a seperate episode. In this one, Billie and Adie are married and they're all hanging out at Billie's house.
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October 20th, 2006 at 05:00am
Well sister dear, hurry up and post the damned thing!
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October 21st, 2006 at 04:35am
Patience young grasshopper. I'll submit it by tonight.
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October 21st, 2006 at 04:54am
i like it. . i love boy crushes. . . hot hot hot!!!
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October 22nd, 2006 at 12:55pm
I submitted part 2!!! Yay! I'll edit a lot tomorrow so it can be up by the day after! Whoo!

It's again, short and to the point. There's more dialouge in this one. But still not a lot compared to the amount of narration. It's not the best, but I'm still improving.
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October 25th, 2006 at 03:17am
Part two of Unrequited is up for reading! Whee!

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I have two readers. -_-; Whatever. But it's up. You can take a look right

Here

Again, I remind the invisible people who look at this thread that the setting in terms of time, place, and pairings is different in part 2 and will be different in part three. Capiche?
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October 25th, 2006 at 09:28am
I read it and I commented, but to make your head slightly larger than it already is, I thought I'd comment here too.

I prefered this to the first. Simply because it has a touch more slash and its nicer to try and visualise.

One thing thats bugging me though... What in hell does AU mean?
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October 25th, 2006 at 09:31am
ATCSM*0_o:
I read it and I commented, but to make your head slightly larger than it already is, I thought I'd comment here too.

I prefered this to the first. Simply because it has a touch more slash and its nicer to try and visualise.

One thing thats bugging me though... What in hell does AU mean?
Alternate Universe.

Meaning that it's pretty much a different world. Example, an example of an AU story would be one where...Green Day didn't exist and Mike was a lawyer or something.
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October 25th, 2006 at 09:35am
Exactly. Like Fallen. xD.

No, see this is AU because Tre is gay. and sometimes, Billie and Adrienne aren't married. and sometimes Billie and Mike are. and sometimes Billie and Tre date.
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October 25th, 2006 at 09:39am
I know what an Alternate Universe is Rolling Eyes

I just didnt know the abbreviation.
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October 25th, 2006 at 09:50am
ATCSM*0_o:
I know what an Alternate Universe is Rolling Eyes

I just didnt know the abbreviation.


And it soooo takes a rocket scientist to figure out what it could stand for. But that's okay. Remember how I thought you were a brunette? Well, if I hadn't already seen your picture, I would say that you were blonde.

Shake
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October 25th, 2006 at 12:02pm
I just found this story and I love it!
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October 25th, 2006 at 12:11pm
iATEjimmysWORLD:
I just found this story and I love it!


Hail My mouth is hanging open in shock. I sound like Sam the Stalker, but I never thought Liz would ever, ever read one of my stories. And you even like it...

Shake I wasn't even this happy when Maddie read Fallen.

Hail You know I worship you, right? My eyes are wide and a mosquito just flew into my mouth. Hail Hail Hail

I LOVE YOU Shocked

okay, smiley overdose, but...*worships*
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October 25th, 2006 at 08:47pm
lyrical_gaah52:
iATEjimmysWORLD:
I just found this story and I love it!


Hail My mouth is hanging open in shock. I sound like Sam the Stalker, but I never thought Liz would ever, ever read one of my stories. And you even like it...

Shake I wasn't even this happy when Maddie read Fallen.

Hail You know I worship you, right? My eyes are wide and a mosquito just flew into my mouth. Hail Hail Hail

I LOVE YOU Shocked

okay, smiley overdose, but...*worships*

Haha, you're my favorite non-crazy/crazy person on this site Wink

And keep writing, damn it!
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October 25th, 2006 at 09:51pm
Wow...that's usually what I say to you...bwahahaha!!!!

There's going to be cyber-slash in the next one! Ahaha!
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October 25th, 2006 at 10:52pm
lyrical_gaah52:
Wow...that's usually what I say to you...bwahahaha!!!!

There's going to be cyber-slash in the next one! Ahaha!

Heh, as long as it's GSB-friendly cyber slash I'm all in Wink
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January 5th, 2007 at 06:47am
Guess wha-aaat? Update coming! I've got an idea forming...whoot! I'll have Fallen to my beta reader by tonight and then I'll start working on Tale Numbah 3! Shake
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January 9th, 2007 at 07:16am
Thank god! I was getting tired of waiting.
See the good thing about mibba is the subcription thingies- so I'll never be waitng in vain!
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January 17th, 2007 at 11:38am
Hello ma darlin' s ! Tale number three will be up shortly. The title :

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"All By Myself"

dun dun duhhhh
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