The Doctor
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 8786
  | October 18th, 2006 at 08:18am Don't ask, don't tell
Seething,
they cliché that seeing
is believing. Not that I always
assumed that
your saintly ancestors
knew that
my water
rising; rising; rising.
Rising above my sunken
eye sockets. Shall I drown
for your pity? Your attention?
Believe me woman,
you're beyond my imagination.
Little sentences,
spark my hardly
incendiary self esteem
into a toxic blaze.
Kindling, oh
Oh the kindling!
Just a few Physics textbooks,
a mere poem or two.
How I disregard the fireflies
that hums during the night.
The burnt-out blue hue
of my iris seems to warn
the lover's scorn, the strangers
foul necessity to
force my mind
into enjambment.
What can be done?
I've tied my own hands to the
radiator. I've thrown myself
into the pit.
All for
their amusement. |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | October 18th, 2006 at 01:54pm I love it.  There's something about your work that feels like it doesn't belong in this time period... as in the style you write in, if that makes sense. But I like that. |
Rape Me
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 25
| October 18th, 2006 at 07:34pm its so very good...XD |
