MintyFreshGeek
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 724 | October 24th, 2006 at 04:50pm You just can't let go
It's causing you pain
You're trying so hard
Again and again
Thinking you've made it
You let out a sigh
Discovered there's more there
You cry "Why? Oh Why?"
You feel some relief
As you're trying again
Maybe it's not you
That's causing the strain
Wishing to end it
You don't want to live
In mercyless horror
You just cannot give
Push a bit harder
The nightmare lives on
Wake up from this dream
Gone horribly wrong
Nothing can help you
You're trapped in the phase
The time has become
An unfortunate haze
The soreness of trying
You're hurting yourself
Please try just for me
It's for your own health
For just a bit longer
I'm counting on you
Keep pushing and straining
You'll get out that poo |
adrea
Jackass
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 1323
  | October 27th, 2006 at 04:40am hah...I wasn't expecting the ending |
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Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 87 | October 27th, 2006 at 04:46am ok wasnt expecting that ending but it was gd  |
MintyFreshGeek
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 724 | October 27th, 2006 at 07:15am Thanks
I felt like making a rather deep poem about something.. well, not. |
