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losers_are_cool King For A Couple Of Days Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 4120	October 27th, 2006 at 09:35am Okay. I've have writers block for ages...and still do. But this is the first thing in forever I've even gotten close to finishing. I'm not totally sure it is, but that's okay. I'm hoping you don't think it's that bad. I need to get used to posting here again... We could stand here and admire The flawless construction of Your heart's sure demise But I don't think I could stand The pain in your crystal clear eyes Some may call it impossible To be so concerned about someone You've never called your own But I know that one day soon We'll be closer than you could imagine Picture perfect and unafraid With hands interlocked, we'll dance Dance through the catacombs of Your unexcavated heart And we'll penetrate deeper than you could dream No one ever said we could take this No one ever said we should try But no one ever said you couldn't be mine So as long as I can see you; feel you I'll try to keep your heart sane We could stand here and admire The flawless construction of Your heart's sure demise But I don't think I could stand The pain in your lonely eyes.
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	October 27th, 2006 at 10:08am I especially loved the first and third stanzas. Beautiful.
losers_are_cool King For A Couple Of Days Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 4120	October 27th, 2006 at 08:04pm Thank you. You have no idea how much that means coming from you. I just adore your poetry.
losers_are_cool King For A Couple Of Days Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 4120	October 28th, 2006 at 05:07pm ...No one else? Please, I'd really appreciate your feedback,
losers_are_cool King For A Couple Of Days Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 4120	October 30th, 2006 at 01:02am No one? Alright...
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	October 30th, 2006 at 10:51am losers_are_cool: Thank you. You have no idea how much that means coming from you. I just adore your poetry.
I-Loved-You Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 5	October 30th, 2006 at 11:02am that was amazing. i would kill to be able to write half as good as that
losers_are_cool King For A Couple Of Days Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 4120	October 31st, 2006 at 09:15pm Oh wow. Thank you.
Joshontheguitar Geek Age: 33 Gender: Male Posts: 222	November 4th, 2007 at 02:06am Gwen, you're still an amazing poet =) My favorite is the third stanza
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	November 4th, 2007 at 07:05pm Gwen, I've missed your work
C.j. Hardcore Pansy Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 97	November 4th, 2007 at 10:24pm aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh i loved it!!!!! you're an amaziing inspiration to me! :]] i never comment but i read i loved it!

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