JOOLS
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Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 11676
  | October 27th, 2006 at 08:39pm Too afraid to lose
but with a heart full of scorn
You're blind to your greed
with your friendship you tore
Your say you're out to please
that you care for those who stay
But really you've set in stone
that you're going a different way
Too many are those who care
but now see what you really feel
Minipulative, tricky, false-
You are as slippery as an eel
Scary is it for me to think
thoughts we've shared in our past
Things I've confided into you
things I've second guessed so fast
Crumbled, crinkled-
together our lives are done
Did you even care at all
Or did you just have fun?
Fun? I'll say it was
until the very end
But I've been so surprised- so shocked
my own grasp, I could not defend |
adrea
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Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 1323
| October 27th, 2006 at 09:38pm that really reminds me of a relationship I'm having with someone now. I like it  good job! |
JOOLS
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Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 11676
| October 29th, 2006 at 12:32am Sooo... maybe no one likes it??
You know, I wanted some opinions, people!
like it, love it, gotta have it... you know?? Like Cold Stone Creamery??
Tell meh what you think.. it's for school, so I wanted to check it out here first... though, I am changing the title...
-Julie |
